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invizygirl — all i am by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-03-01 05:24:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description i speak long, elaborate lectures of
white noise
from a brightly lit stage that
dilutes your vision of me
completely.

though i wear no make up,
there's a thick layer
of neon dreams and smiles
upon my face,
a distraction.

my blows and banter
hold no power,
however violent or
emphatic.

i'd rather not answer
your inquires, but
if you must know,
i'll admit that
i'm only a scam.
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Comments: 17

FirmAsRock [2010-03-06 22:50:56 +0000 UTC]

IT's good. Your thoughts are more interesting than your writing. Why is that?

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invizygirl In reply to FirmAsRock [2010-03-07 01:41:39 +0000 UTC]

i have no idea. lol. i feel i write how i think and i express my thoughts like i act on stage. i duno if that just made any sense at all.

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FirmAsRock In reply to invizygirl [2010-03-19 20:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Nope. No sense. Try again?

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invizygirl In reply to FirmAsRock [2010-03-20 05:39:15 +0000 UTC]

ee sorry!! umm well i write the way my emotion works in my mind. so if i'm writing things that don't seem to make sense it probably doesn't fully make sense in my mind. and i go through my thought process li on stage because i censor unimportant information or information that i don't want/need to deal with and script things out in my head. any better?

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FirmAsRock In reply to invizygirl [2010-03-23 10:00:57 +0000 UTC]

dA is therepy for you isn't it?

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invizygirl In reply to FirmAsRock [2010-03-23 10:49:38 +0000 UTC]

meh. *shrugs* i don't know. writing is to me. dA is to tell me whether it's worth it lol.

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FirmAsRock In reply to invizygirl [2010-03-23 11:32:24 +0000 UTC]

I think you need to indulge in some therapy.

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invizygirl In reply to FirmAsRock [2010-03-23 14:40:53 +0000 UTC]

haha. maybe so.

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FirmAsRock In reply to invizygirl [2010-03-24 00:03:35 +0000 UTC]

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invizygirl In reply to FirmAsRock [2010-03-25 14:01:34 +0000 UTC]

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PaperDart [2010-03-04 19:19:16 +0000 UTC]

It's interesting; are you planning on editing since you're not happy with it?

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invizygirl In reply to PaperDart [2010-03-05 00:14:49 +0000 UTC]

i haven't decided yet. i'd like to, but the pessimistic side of me says to give up.

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PaperDart In reply to invizygirl [2010-03-05 18:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Don't give up! I think this is worth working up - and besides, you won't get anywhere if you don't keep pushing a bit harder.

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invizygirl In reply to PaperDart [2010-03-06 06:48:49 +0000 UTC]

well thanks for the encouragement. it might not get done for a while as life is pretty hectic, but i think i will try and get this in better shape.

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PaperDart In reply to invizygirl [2010-03-06 09:49:02 +0000 UTC]

Let me know when you get there.

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iamadem [2010-03-01 17:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Quite a wonderful opening you have with this first stanza, and I think you carry the reader's attention throughout the poem very nicely. These are my two cents, so handle them with care, but I'm impressed.

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invizygirl In reply to iamadem [2010-03-01 20:39:46 +0000 UTC]

well thanks so much honey! and thanks for the fav. it is much appreciated.

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