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Published: 2015-12-15 11:22:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1172; Favourites: 99; Downloads: 0
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So i did a quick sketch thingu of my snk oc- ( no she is not asian. She is actually german.)
I basically wanted to hear some soft critiques ( no hard/harsh critiques-- any criticism that i think that is harsh will be hidden.)
I want to improve at semi muscular stuffs (Been drawing muscular men in my sketchbook-- and failing.)
I see that the arms are like --- not supposed to look liek that idk its mixed with some animu. EEE i didnt used pencils or the circle thingu-- ;--------;
Β (Ill do better next time i swear* cries forever*)
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This is pretty good! I need to practice on female muscles myself :S
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Y thank you so much dear <3
Weep yes practice practice practice <3 you can do it qwq
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It's so beautiful! *^*
I love the way you've drawn the anatomy!
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omg you think so ? β₯ Thank you !!!! qwq
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No problem! :3
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agshagfsgafs Omg that anatomy!!! I love it bby awesome job!!
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Eeeeeeep thank you so much bby qqqqq o qqqqqq <33
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Awesome work!
However, I see a slight problem with the forearm. From what I see, the arm is in a short of prone position, with the top of the hand facing the viewer (if the hand were to be drawn). So, the biceps would be pointing medially, which you pulled off quite nicely. 
So, in short, that little "v" shape on the forearm shouldn't be there. Hope my feedback helps, and keep up the good work!Β Β
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EEEEEE Thank you so much for the wonderful critique <333 it is much much appreciated by me <3333
Eeeep your critique is wonderful ;; n ;; *sob*
It really helps dear *hugs* and will do <3
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Oooh, German! Cool~
I WOULD give a critique... If I could! This looks so beautiful to me! I wish I could draw this well! It's absolutely gorgeous...
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EEEE critiques are really welcome <333
Thank you so much dear <3
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^^ I like doing them! But my skill level is only so high...
You're very welcome!~
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You're seriously good at traditional art that's for sure. I love it! <3
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Omg really ? QnQ thank yoi !! My hands are unusual shaky these days.. ;n;
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Yah yah, keep it up ovo
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Ahhh this is really good >///< You just have minor mistakes, but this is really good, i promise *-* (lmfao, i die everytime i try muscular men, not that i can't, i just simply die)
Her left eyes is slightly lower then her right one, but it's no biggy 030 Her right arm kind of disappears passing her breast, like it could be hiding behind, but if i'm guessing right, it's int he same position as the left one, so i think a bit her forearm should be visible. And lastly, the lines that refine her hips and ribs are slightly off. Like her body is facing rightwards, but the lines are more tilted to the screen. (ahhh these are mistakes i looked into very closely to help you neehhhh (////) )
So besides those mistakes, which are actually barely noticeable, i gotta give you an A 
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Eeeee thank you precious turtur ehheheheheheehheeheheheh
(I suffer both-- i die and cant do it the same time-- YOLOOO)
EEEEEE THANK YOU FOR THE HELPFUL HELP YOU GAVE ME.
Thank you really *showers you with emotions of mine *
Eeee you are making me so happy
OMG BOOBIEZ IS HARD THO --- I HAD DIFFICULT DRAWING BOOBEZ
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*blows on your face*
(Lmaooo, then the struggle is real xDD)
AHHH YOU'RE WELCOMEEE And you make ma happy with your kawaii artzzz ahhhhhhh *blushes into oblivion*Β Β Β Β
AGHHHHHH BUT THE FINAL RESULT--- you just made da boobiez so boobiez ;-; like there aren't even words for how boobiez your boobiez look ;-; cofcof okay that sounded kind of perverted cofcof
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These are really good, simple, but it shows that she doesn't lack physical strength or tower over others in it. My only real problem with it is probably be that it looks a little "Lonely" X3, in the centre. Like right between the two lines under her ribs; there's just a space.Β
It's not really too noticeable though and I'm not sure if this is during work out or after. Like if she was just starting to work out then it's perfect! (Or at least I think so since I've never technically "worked out".
But it looks good, Chi!
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Eeee thank you so much for the wonderful critique silver!! Omggggg her abs shouldnt prolly look like that thoo--- itll like be pretty simple well-- i really dont know why xD i dont want her to look like sue becauss i am scared of it qnq
Thank you silvia !! (I tried doing workouts-- but its hard dud)
Thank you again <3
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^^ No problem! I love critiquing your work so much! You're improving, trying new things, and risking feedback, it's really inspiring!! <3
XD haha You're welcome...? (Ye, my P.E teacher decided to do some ab work today XDD I know the feel now.)
You're welcome, you're welcome X3Β
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I think you know how much I like Muscle stuff 0.0
This is actually pretty good it, the shading that will do more of the defining for ya
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Eeee yeah <333 i am really starting to fall inlove with muscular anatomies <3 tho i need more improvements on this one <33
Thank you so much dear i am glad you like it <2333
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WoahΒ
Calm down
Damn those musclesΒ
they're awesome
the hair,the eyes the everythingΒ
like wowΒ
WOW
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OMGLOB THANK YOU THO-- i wanted to reduce muscles because i am scared of being flammed as mary sue qvq but thanks again <3
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Oh senpai don't worry at all!!! You are incredibly awesome at it!
believe me
And No problemo
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She is really cool woah! The anatomy looks great, only the shoulder seems bit of (I dunno how explain it well....) But overall I really like this!Β
Just keep learning and practicing about anatomy and look at many references, you might not get better overnight of course, but you're doing really great, so keep going! (^u^)b
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Thank you so much <3
Yeah ;o;
IF ONLY THERR WAS A CTRL Z.
I will do my absolute best dear <333/i am just loving muscular anatomy these days <33
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Thank you si much <3
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This, is what I've been trying to do, FOR YEARS... ;;u;;
GOOD JOB HOSHII!!
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EEEE GOODLUCK THO--
Even though its really hard-- but u gotta do my best <3
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THANX YOU~
Oh well, gotta look at some references... ^^"
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you do better anatomy than me like
i cant even muscle
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Shhhh i cant eben-- look at dem shoulders tho-- so fail.
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better than my shoulders x'DD
*bows down*
senpai
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Personally I think the anatomy is pretty great and the muscle looks accurate, the only 'bad' point is the top of the arm for me the shoulder is too round and out compared to the arm's line ^^
Otherwise I love her hair :3
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Thank you so much dear β₯ i will keep that in mind and will try better next time β₯ β₯ β₯
Eeep yeah ;o; i noticed when i had drew it-- i cant even erase it Thank you so much for the wonderful critique β₯
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You're welcome <3
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