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Invoking — Beautiful Disaster

Published: 2013-01-29 03:14:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 5630; Favourites: 100; Downloads: 57
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Description I miss you, even though I pretend that I don't. It hurts just to be awake, just to breathe this air... I don't know if I can keep this facade up for much longer. I tried. But despite all my efforts, you still decided I just wasn't enough. Now you're already with HIM and expect it to not hurt me even more? I- I hate you... I hate you and our memories...
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This is a very heavily adapted existing piece in my gallery. It originally had six quatrains and was also orginally titled "Document 5" [link] (Yes, that was on purpose - completely different story though) but, I decided to retitle to "Beautiful Disaster" because it's catchy and more relatable. This is/can be about a serious break-up or divorce or whatever you want to call it. This was written a while ago, I simply adapted it to this typographic background. I don't really feel like this, but if you do, my heart goes out to you with care

The font that I used is called "Old Dreams".

Background Image: Google Images
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Comments: 21

BellaGBear [2013-09-17 21:00:43 +0000 UTC]

You write very well. It is not a very cheerfull topic, but that is understandable.  Somehow this work shows real skill

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Invoking In reply to BellaGBear [2013-09-17 21:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you, very much.

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BellaGBear In reply to Invoking [2013-09-17 23:05:33 +0000 UTC]

no problem at al. When I enjoy reading something it deserves a compliment

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madameshadowenn [2013-08-21 17:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Aloha! Just a little note to say I’ve used the title of this piece to help me create a title poem which you can read here: madameshadowenn.deviantart.com…
I’ve given you full credit in the comments section, but should you want me to remove your title, please do let me know!

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Invoking In reply to madameshadowenn [2013-09-17 21:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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madameshadowenn In reply to Invoking [2013-09-18 19:18:09 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!

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realARTIZT [2013-02-07 02:15:02 +0000 UTC]

The background is to dark or contrasted to see many lines clearly, but this is one of the best poems I've read lately. Every line flows and ends just right. Beautiful job and I hope to read more from you in the future Thanks for your submission to #SayItHere !

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LastoftheWolves [2013-02-02 04:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Can I add this to my pictures for the background on my desktop please?? This is just too amazing to resist. Either way, keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to see more!!

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Invoking In reply to LastoftheWolves [2013-02-03 03:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes, you may~ Thank you very much <3

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LastoftheWolves In reply to Invoking [2013-02-03 04:04:45 +0000 UTC]

THANKS! no problem!

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ivory-phills [2013-01-30 01:14:37 +0000 UTC]

This is so heartbreaking.

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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo [2013-01-29 23:06:40 +0000 UTC]

I like it and it makes me want to hug you <3 You're getting so good at picking a picture for the poems :3 I really like the background picture~ most of the leaves look healthy, but a few look like they are shrivelling up. I think it really suits and complements the poem

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alinsethme [2013-01-29 19:46:31 +0000 UTC]

great description of a beautiful disaster

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tommyboywood [2013-01-29 19:16:38 +0000 UTC]

nice

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babyvfan [2013-01-29 12:42:57 +0000 UTC]

That just...blew me away

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ItachiXShana [2013-01-29 06:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Great text and beautiful picture.
But like it was said before, it's hard to read because of the background.

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SilverScreams999 [2013-01-29 06:14:09 +0000 UTC]

So SO beautiful! Both the picture and description!

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infinitelove143 [2013-01-29 04:16:47 +0000 UTC]

This was very well written. I LOVE the message and emotion.

Just one suggestion... it was hard to read in my opinion... color and contrast wise. But then again, I have my monitor set dark so who knows haha.

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EmoRapunzel [2013-01-29 04:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Incredible

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chancerox [2013-01-29 03:27:40 +0000 UTC]

all of your work is stunning. thank you for sharing

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Invoking In reply to chancerox [2013-01-29 03:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very very much~

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