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Published: 2017-01-15 10:52:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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This is going to be my first attempt at working with coloured lines. Any feedback on what I've got so far would be greatRelated content
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Ooh, it looks great! I like windswept things x3
The only things I can think of are:
-Her hair looks a bit thin for how long it is. Maybe have a bit more width closer to her head/back?
-Her boob is a bit too round, maybe? I am not good at human anatomy
-Her collarbone might be too prominent? But maybe once it's colored it'll look just fine.
(the hands look pretty awesome, though! Damn)
Is this why you wanted the fabric model?
I am still yet to do anything with colored lines- I haven't been brave enough yet.
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Yeah, the fabric model would've helped SO fucking much for this... I spent about 2 hours on the shape of the sleeve alone...
I'll see about fixing those things, especially seeing as I'm currently dealing with the background right now
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But the fabric bits ended up looking so good, so you did an amazing job!
Just trying to help <3
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I managed to change most of them slightly without screwing up the whole thing, I've uploaded an update to it now
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it's fun to switch between the two by putting them into different tabs and flipping between them super fast. You can see the differences *really* easily
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you can do it super fast by pressing Ctrl+[Number of your tab, counting left-right]
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