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justmelee [2003-09-09 02:37:41 +0000 UTC]
I love this! The more I read of your writing the more I love it, you have incredibly style and talent with your words.
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IonaSandford In reply to devilicious [2003-09-08 22:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou. I had been so frustrated writing in the last few days becasue nothing would come out right. This sort of came together of it's own accord and I thought it was ok.
I'm glad you liked the imagery. It was the only way I could say the things I needed to.
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rikoko [2003-09-06 18:10:46 +0000 UTC]
i like it because that's what i used to do when i was little, close my eyes and pretend the monsters weren't there. i actually still do it in school and hope that all the dumb people will go away. lol
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BlackRavenWing [2003-09-06 12:03:56 +0000 UTC]
I like it too. It just speaks how you don't feel like anything goods gonna happen no matter what.
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IonaSandford In reply to BlackRavenWing [2003-09-06 14:28:09 +0000 UTC]
Which is exactly the right sentiment. I'm so glad you understand that. Becuase I still can't decide whether the dark is safe or stifling.
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BlackRavenWing In reply to IonaSandford [2003-09-06 16:02:12 +0000 UTC]
I often try to decide the same thing. I guess it depends on how your feeling to explain whether the darks comforting or not.
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thelittlecheez [2003-09-05 22:34:43 +0000 UTC]
i like this because you can tell that you had a bad day when you wrote it. i think it's kind of important that however your feeling is reflected in the mood of the poem.
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