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Published: 2011-08-18 12:08:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 679; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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βSitting by the creekLooking at the clear water flow
I saw your face full of light.
Great silence fell on us.
We looked at each other
And we knew.
Stay with me.β
sculptures and words by Daphna
a new series in process -
I was invited by a friend to take pictures of her sculptures in order to design the cover of her first poems' book
your comments and ideas will be most welcome
more works of "images and words" are here [link]
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Excellent. The airy space around the figures works well with the anonymity of the sculptures. ( I was well on my way to writing an essay here, but changed my mind) Kudos to both of you.
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Ahh, love! I like it a lot. You do it so well.
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Beautiful treatment Ilil - and I for one do like the 'breathing room' over their heads you have given the pair - to me it gives a sense of they being alone unto themselves only. The combination of Daphna's sculptures, her poems and you sensitive treatment of them both make them better than the sum of their parts.
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The moment between the persons is so intimate that, despite the beautiful light, you did not dared to invade this intimacy...You stayed at respectfull distance.
So the light is good but the angle/distance is too impersonnal for my taste regarding the spirit of the sculpture and text.
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