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Published: 2009-05-29 00:25:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1171; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 55
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Description * i know the background sucks, but i couldn't think of one to do!*(plus i hate doing them)

This is my character Iris Langly, before she became Dame Iris of Farstar. Whenshe was still learning to control all of her albitlies and training in her martial arts from her master.
Time: over three days to finish
Done in reg. pencils, inked with sharpe and colored with colored pencils. I also have also started to use a blending pencil

Comments are welcome...
Enjoy

P.S i know her left arm is off, but i think i did a damn good job on her
heres the inked version[link]
Edit* I added this profile for :iconOCthreater: group.

Credits: character drawn by me and story by me and my hubby
Fandom:from our role playing group of rifts
Extras:I have aprofile of this charceter in my journal called Iris
Contests?:can be used but with my permisson first.

*GENERAL



Name:~ Iris Maire Langley AKA Dame Morgan Aka Dame Chandler
*Ethnicity/Nationality:~ white from New york
*Sexual Orientation:~ stright
*Handedness:~*Skin:~ right handed, and is tan
*Gender:~ female
*Blood Type:~A+
*Age:~*Birthday:~ 28 july 14th 1980
*Zodiac (Greek):~
*Zodiac (Chinese):~ monkey i think
*Height:~ 5' 7"
*Weight:~ 140
*Eyes:~ green ringed with red
*Hair:~ firy red
*Distinguishing Marks:~ battle scars all over
*Description:~ Iris is tall with a muscler build frommartail arts and sword fighting. She has short red hair due to pulling out becuase of her kids, huge bossom, large arms and legs. She tends to wear clothing that is lose to allow to move.

*PERSONALITY

Overview:~*Traits:~ Iris tends to be calm most of the time, but has a hair tigger. She doesn't like rules muchour men who want nothing more then to get in bed with her. She can also be caring too. Her traits are a slight smirk when a amused, and a sick sense of humor.
*Phobias:~*Favorite Colors:~ no real phobias yet, and her favorite color is blue.
*Favorite Scents:~ nothing too strong, or flowery
*Favorite Foods:~ any thing, she always on the run.
*Other Favorites:~*Strengths:~ she adores her childern. Her strenght is her family
*Weaknesses:~ having a hair tigger


*FAMILY

Spouse:~ Derrick Chandler
*Children:~ three, Mayflower, Lillian and Ash
*Parents:~ Maire and Niel O'Neil
*Siblings:~ one Amy Nicole Langly
*Pets:~ none

*BACKGROUND

First Kiss:~ doesn't rember that much since her childhood was not normal
*First Love:~Derrick Chandler
*Extras:~*Story:~ Iris didn't grow up normal. She was born with super powers. Run incribly fast, fly wingless and the last one is contol fire. Which is why she ran away from home whenshe was nineteen. She ended up setting her families home and a man on fire. Because he was trying to kill her,the flames devored him for that.
From there, she became an outlaw after trying to recuse a friend and had to live the world. Somwhere in there she got deposted in England way in the future. Where she became a knight.
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Comments: 22

Norbert2009 [2009-05-29 00:37:21 +0000 UTC]

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Ah Ah! There it goes for a critique well deserved! First, I LOVE the hair! You did a very good job with your lines on this, and with the lighting in the red, it gives the impression of fire. The face could have been more worked and her expression also. The position of the legs make her a sexy look and desirable. The fire in the back could be with more lines and details, so it could give the feeling of real fire, like her hair.

You said it, yes, you need to find ideas for your backgrounds and that will be your next challenge. For the story, I would say it is good, because not all the people give a soul to their character. Only one litle thing is to add more shading and lights to your clothes and skin e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />

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iris1999 In reply to Norbert2009 [2009-05-29 00:44:04 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know, i have been told time and time again. But that how it goes for me, for years i had only been drawing people and not backgrounds But i'm trying.
I'm also a bit eager to get it finished, because if i didn't i would never get it done

Thanks for your kind words, it will be something that i will...try.. to do, but haven't yet

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RomanticDetective [2010-01-25 02:23:16 +0000 UTC]

oh my o////////o very pretty ^^

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iris1999 In reply to RomanticDetective [2010-01-25 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]

why thank u

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Slayer-1412 [2010-01-25 02:23:08 +0000 UTC]

an interesting story you have here

nice fire

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iris1999 In reply to Slayer-1412 [2010-01-25 02:25:10 +0000 UTC]

why thank u glad u like it

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DivinityCreature [2009-08-09 08:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful colors, you did it well ^^

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iris1999 In reply to DivinityCreature [2009-08-09 14:45:49 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much

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DivinityCreature In reply to iris1999 [2009-08-09 19:55:08 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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The-Mirrorball-Man [2009-06-19 03:18:03 +0000 UTC]

I like it, lovely colors.

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iris1999 In reply to The-Mirrorball-Man [2009-06-23 01:42:35 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much

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oceanlanae [2009-06-07 19:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Oooh I love the hair! Nice job

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iris1999 In reply to oceanlanae [2009-06-07 19:39:39 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much

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Rednee-san [2009-05-31 23:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Looks great! Love the colors!

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iris1999 In reply to Rednee-san [2009-06-01 01:14:15 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much

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Rednee-san In reply to iris1999 [2009-06-02 01:39:40 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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Last-Superpower [2009-05-31 16:14:04 +0000 UTC]

very nice coloring work and the figure is pretty dead on. good work

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iris1999 In reply to Last-Superpower [2009-05-31 16:15:14 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much

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Last-Superpower In reply to iris1999 [2009-05-31 16:38:13 +0000 UTC]

don't mention it

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Birthstone [2009-05-29 01:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Very sexy!^^

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iris1999 In reply to Birthstone [2009-05-29 10:29:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Birthstone In reply to iris1999 [2009-05-29 23:29:46 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome!

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