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ranchforman [2009-02-21 06:30:39 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I usually mind my own business.. sort of.. But this shot caught my attention.
The shot is nearly perfect, and your fear that it may be a little dull is seriously flawed.
This shot has a lot of incredible elements, as well as the "right" photo essentials.
You have the hard lines of the path as some incredible lead lines to the focal subject, which is in
its own right incredible. Your focal length is perfect for this shot, as the metal canopy is in focus
and the trees in the back are not, including the mist, you have here an incredibly mystical shot.
The B&W is perfect for this shot too, as color would have killed the tone and mood of the capture all together.
Now one thing, the shot is off center to the right. You need to crop the shot just enough to make the distance between the right and left the same...
That is all.. This is an incredible shot none the less.. and I well most certanly feature this in my next journal!!
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ranchforman In reply to irishcompass [2009-02-21 23:46:13 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome, I wasn't sure about how you would handle the critique, as you have an natural eye for perspective, you just need a little work on some detail.. You most certainly have the beginnin of a pro career.. I know that sounds a bit silly comin from me, but you do have the eye and the ability to shoot interesting angles.
The crop looks outstanding, now it is perfection!!!
As I said earlier, I will most certainly feature this in my next journal!!
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Eliza-mac [2009-01-07 12:05:09 +0000 UTC]
Just read over other comments, no way no how does this belong in scraps!!! It's perfect.
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irishcompass In reply to Eliza-mac [2009-01-07 13:57:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Something about just seemed kind of dull to me, like it was missing something.
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Eliza-mac In reply to irishcompass [2009-01-07 14:07:19 +0000 UTC]
Maybe that's the title for this. It would make a good location for a gothic style photo shoot, a still dark figure in it. But this is strong enough to stand alone.
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irishcompass In reply to Eliza-mac [2009-01-07 17:16:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I wish I had somebody in it. Thanks for saying it's strong enough to stand alone. That was exactly what I was worried about.
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Meluene [2009-01-07 08:40:33 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful place! Where did you find such thing?
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irishcompass In reply to Meluene [2009-01-07 14:03:41 +0000 UTC]
It's at the Botanical Gardens in Birmingham, AL. I like shooting pictures there, and it was great that morning because hardly anybody was there.
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AdinaRS [2009-01-06 22:59:33 +0000 UTC]
Nice!
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batorr [2009-01-06 21:55:26 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!!!
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batorr In reply to irishcompass [2009-01-07 01:39:32 +0000 UTC]
That is very nice of you my friend!!!
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indikat [2009-01-06 21:17:21 +0000 UTC]
That's very beautiful!!
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irishcompass In reply to indikat [2009-01-06 21:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I was debating about putting it into scraps. It just feels like it is missing something to me.
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