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Published: 2016-08-20 05:38:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 701; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description So.... I'm seriously really working on editing my book, Hideaway. I added a part at the beginning and now I'm completely rewriting the original beginning, which will probably end up being chapter 2.

Anyway, I basically wrote 2k words for an hour and then drew these pictures. After I edited them in photoshop, did I go back to writing? No, I've just been sitting here staring at them. lol.

The first picture is from Carly's first scene, and the second one is from Arthur's first scene. It's before they met for the first time

Hideaway, Carly Callahan, and Arthur Ramsey © irishgirl982
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Comments: 11

Lady-RyuuXX87 [2016-08-21 17:25:11 +0000 UTC]

I can't imagine what Arthur is doing... but Carly looks like she's either texting someone or worrying about her stalker and how her life will change xD; anywho- lovely drawings! ^O^

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irishgirl982 In reply to Lady-RyuuXX87 [2016-08-22 03:23:14 +0000 UTC]

haha, yes you're right about Carly. The Arthur one is from an added scene. He almost accidentally pokes his eye with the tiny umbrella.

Thanks!!

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Lupana [2016-08-20 19:23:13 +0000 UTC]

I am so seriously curious about what Arthur is doing XD I'm guessing his umbrella poked him in the eye and now he is confused. And therefore his buddy (I can't for the life of me remember his name right now, Peter?) is laughing and saying how Arthur needs to lighten up.

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irishgirl982 In reply to Lupana [2016-08-21 00:12:34 +0000 UTC]

LOL when I read this, I was thinking you know these characters a bit too well. haha! In the new scene, Paul (close with the P name!) drags Arthur to the fall mixer at school (which is Hawaiian themed.) Then Paul ditches Arthur to flirt with some girls (typical) and Arthur runs into Becca at the refreshment table... where he almost pokes his eye out with the umbrella. XD

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Lupana In reply to irishgirl982 [2016-08-23 23:59:55 +0000 UTC]

LOL Well I did just read this story again not too long ago, so it's a bit fresh in my head yet haha. But yes I tend to do this with characters! xD

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teash83 [2016-08-20 18:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness, your icon is so cute! And are you seriously editing the book???? For publication??? Finally???

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irishgirl982 In reply to teash83 [2016-08-21 00:07:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying. I met a self published author on a writing facebook group who convinced me I should go for it. Editing is such a huge task that it overwhelms me, but I'm going to try and take it one chapter at a time. Have I sent you the new beginning chapter? Would you like it and the new original beginning chapter? (I'm still working on that one)

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teash83 In reply to irishgirl982 [2016-08-21 15:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, please! It has been too long since I've read Hideaway and Paul

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irishgirl982 In reply to teash83 [2016-08-22 03:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Paul! I sent you the first several scenes earlier today!!

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teash83 In reply to irishgirl982 [2016-08-22 23:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I cannot wait to read, and I still wanna read that other story you sent me. <3

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irishgirl982 In reply to teash83 [2016-08-23 04:46:52 +0000 UTC]

<3!!!!!!!
*waiting for you to send me yours* lol

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