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ShadowRider1232 [2013-05-15 10:49:44 +0000 UTC]

"Are not you afraid of dying?" should be "Are you not afraid of dying?"

And her response to that should end with the word "here" rather than "there"

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flozoa [2013-05-14 02:18:15 +0000 UTC]

this is great! But one thing. You said you wanted to know about any mistakes, so...
on the top right panel, instead of "And why the fuck I'm here, if not for die?" it should be "And why the fuck am I here, if not to die?"

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AudreyLatias [2013-02-19 22:40:11 +0000 UTC]

next!!!!!

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Dragonauroralight [2013-02-19 16:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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