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ishtarboy3000 β€” Retreat
Published: 2007-04-24 11:19:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Retreating now becomes a sin
To cherish such sweet hopes within

Wanting to commit this crime
And slumber in the arms of time

Whispers she in silver tones
β€˜It is not you, but I who own’

And in the startled comprehension
Her sweetest kiss release the tension

Bitter has she often been
With diffuse kindness in between

But in that moment, in her arms
To slowly realize her charms.

All that is and ever was
Shudders in her mighty pause

And soon I am alone once more
Though she will never leave, for sure

Surely now the lesson learned
That time prevents from being spurned
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Comments: 8

Roses-R-Red [2007-05-11 00:38:30 +0000 UTC]

I really really like this.
It's so discriptive.
Beautiful.

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ishtarboy3000 In reply to Roses-R-Red [2007-05-11 14:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Roses-R-Red In reply to ishtarboy3000 [2007-05-12 06:22:43 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.
w00t for poets.

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ishtarboy3000 In reply to Roses-R-Red [2007-10-04 19:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Amen to that!

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sweetsnow73 [2007-04-24 20:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Such a tease..

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DrWombat [2007-04-24 11:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it's just me, but she sounds like a bitch. XD

Uhh, anyways. Very nice poem there.

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ishtarboy3000 In reply to DrWombat [2007-04-24 11:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

(Time IS a bitch that's the point)

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DrWombat In reply to ishtarboy3000 [2007-04-25 11:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Hehee, indeed she is. ^_^

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