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Published: 2011-03-04 12:35:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description We shall forever be
Eternal enemies
Watching stars and counting sheep
It's you and me
My dearest sleep
Sit and I shall watch you weep
Weep with me
Kindred spirits, we may be
I'll kiss you before I kill you
It's my obligation now to thrill you
I want to be clean
I want to be seen
I want to see you too, all the way through
To your soul
I can feel the heat of the fire
Inside your chest
Let me see the rest
Bare yourself to me
Kindred spirits, you and I
I'll find a way to watch you die
I'll find a way to watch you fly
My dearest sleep
We'll count the sheep
I pray to you, my soul to keep
And as I pray, you'll watch me weep
And as I weep, you'll weep with me
And as you weep I'll make you see
That all we are is what we can be
Eternity I give to thee.
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Comments: 21

Living-Meme [2011-03-07 03:37:55 +0000 UTC]

haha I dare you to read this to 1 of your future-patients. This is scary, but I like it all flows. I'm not the best with words. Anyway, your work is so much different than others.

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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-03-07 09:20:34 +0000 UTC]

I believe I may get the sack. How is it different?

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Living-Meme In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-08 01:45:46 +0000 UTC]

It's a surprise. It makes me want to dig (but not intrude) into your mind. In other words, you have weird thoughts. >.<

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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-03-08 04:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha ummmm thankyou ?

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Living-Meme In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-08 05:17:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I want to see your work get published. Anyway, do what you wish with it.

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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-03-08 09:38:43 +0000 UTC]

>.> I don't think there's a big market for poetry

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Living-Meme In reply to Living-Meme [2011-03-07 03:39:10 +0000 UTC]

I meant: "...how it all flows".

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PaxZed [2011-03-05 15:07:20 +0000 UTC]

I do like it but im excited to see it refined

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IsolationRow In reply to PaxZed [2011-03-06 12:05:01 +0000 UTC]

me too

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PaxZed In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-06 13:56:41 +0000 UTC]

good call

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IsolationRow In reply to PaxZed [2011-03-06 13:57:03 +0000 UTC]

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StonedSmeagol [2011-03-04 23:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful, well written & great placement of your words.

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IsolationRow In reply to StonedSmeagol [2011-03-05 08:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot.

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StonedSmeagol In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-05 12:25:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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BellaQuill [2011-03-04 17:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Feels bittersweet to me..I really like it!

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IsolationRow In reply to BellaQuill [2011-03-05 08:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, I'm glad you enjoy it

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BellaQuill In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-08 18:39:24 +0000 UTC]

YouΒ΄re very welcome!

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kaschill7 [2011-03-04 13:13:33 +0000 UTC]

its really cool i just cant quite grasp who its refering to

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IsolationRow In reply to kaschill7 [2011-03-04 13:22:58 +0000 UTC]

I am speaking to an audience of everyone inside my head

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kaschill7 In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-04 13:24:10 +0000 UTC]

oh lol

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IsolationRow In reply to kaschill7 [2011-03-04 13:26:35 +0000 UTC]

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