Comments: 12
AndrewHallwood [2011-02-28 09:04:59 +0000 UTC]
yeah violence IS always followed by silence...
well war isn't always about who's right
but who's left...
(i stole that quote of the internet)
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Living-Meme [2011-02-27 00:32:30 +0000 UTC]
I suggest you put advice in your poem. This is reminds me of my rant about promoters of death and canibalism. Anyway, I agree with you about fools. They just don't want to learn wisdom. They'd rather imagine life is about pleasuring themselves with temporary devices and cheap whores.
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Living-Meme In reply to Living-Meme [2011-02-27 00:36:00 +0000 UTC]
I meant *cannibalism Anyway, I'd just remove the stanzas that seem too long or 'weak' to you.
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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-02-27 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]
I cant. I'd rather add than take.. I get emotionally attached D:
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Living-Meme In reply to IsolationRow [2011-02-27 03:38:43 +0000 UTC]
Alright. It just wasn't enough for you. It's can only get better.
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bmarvel777 [2011-02-26 14:56:56 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, it has an awsome rythem!
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