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Published: 2011-02-27 06:27:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description Sickly whispering winter screams on a lonely summer's night
A screaming man in a marching band struggles for the light
A shattered star explosion shines through a gusty springtime day
When fleeting autumn breaks on through and tears it all away

Night creeps back as black as black and winter hangs it's head
It swirls around an angry cloud and finds out that it's dead
Away, away a black bird breathes and flutters through the light
Always breaking, bleeding, burning, bringing back the night.
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Comments: 4

Mab-Faerie [2011-03-12 08:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Interesting imagery used here. It's very dark, and yet melodic due to the inherent rhythm and flow of the words.
Fav'd <3

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IsolationRow In reply to Mab-Faerie [2011-03-12 08:38:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it

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Fantasy-luver [2011-02-28 11:47:17 +0000 UTC]

I notice that all of your poetry has a nice rhythm to it. Lovely

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IsolationRow In reply to Fantasy-luver [2011-02-28 12:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou I always have the rhythm in my head and wonder if other people notice it

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