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Halfloner [2011-02-26 04:32:36 +0000 UTC]
The rhymes make it better and I like how you used repetition. Isn't this how we all feel at some point in our lives?
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Radraversion2 [2011-02-25 12:32:12 +0000 UTC]
sad stuff... child moves out can't handle life moves back home. shows defeat, shame and regret. its a good one.
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