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IsolationRow — Safety of Home
Published: 2011-02-25 10:47:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Mother, bring me back to your womb
I crave the warmth and safety of that tomb
The world is too frightful for me to get by
I think that sometimes I would rather die

Mother, I've had enough of this place
We're all judged by our looks and our race
I feel I've become just another disgrace
I recognise my reflection in each evil's face

Mother, can I please come home?
This world is too dangerous for me to roam
I've had enough of the crazy land
Please mother come and take my hand

Mother, I miss your safety so
A place where I can come and grow
I'm still a child and this world is wild
I feel so alone in a world I don't know
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Comments: 11

AndrewHallwood [2011-02-28 09:10:01 +0000 UTC]

very true... lol sorry B im kinda spamming all your work
i agree a lot with wat dreamspring said... it all fits (:

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IsolationRow In reply to AndrewHallwood [2011-02-28 12:17:24 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks, and it's ok. I like it good ego boost

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AndrewHallwood In reply to IsolationRow [2011-02-28 12:43:35 +0000 UTC]

hehe good good (:

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Halfloner [2011-02-26 04:32:36 +0000 UTC]

The rhymes make it better and I like how you used repetition. Isn't this how we all feel at some point in our lives?

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IsolationRow In reply to Halfloner [2011-02-28 12:16:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it and can relate

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Dreamspring [2011-02-25 20:30:40 +0000 UTC]

"Mother, I've had enough of this place
We're all judged by our looks and our race
I feel I've become just another disgrace"

I feel like i fit there (:
Once again this is perfect

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IsolationRow In reply to Dreamspring [2011-02-25 21:14:48 +0000 UTC]

you are too kind

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Dreamspring In reply to IsolationRow [2011-02-25 21:35:26 +0000 UTC]

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Radraversion2 [2011-02-25 12:32:12 +0000 UTC]

sad stuff... child moves out can't handle life moves back home. shows defeat, shame and regret. its a good one.

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IsolationRow In reply to Radraversion2 [2011-02-25 12:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much

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Radraversion2 In reply to IsolationRow [2011-02-25 14:03:51 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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