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Published: 2011-02-23 06:00:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Sex is such a funny task
That causes such emotion
Some do it for money
And some for sweet devotion
Sex is such a dirty word
That causes so much joy
Sex makes people fall in love
For some it's just a ploy
Sex is such a fun activity
For those that feel no shame
For some it matters deeply
For some it's just a game
Sex is so very complicated
It makes me so confused
It feels so good and feels so wrong
It makes many feel used
Sex is such a funny thing
That causes deep regret
Some want to remember it
While I want to forget
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Comments: 16

ancientpoet [2012-12-24 21:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Sex feels like love to some, but you are right, it is simply physical gratification until bonding takes place. Don't forget, remember the good times. Peace and Love,

Patrick

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RudiRueWarecorgi [2011-03-04 13:15:24 +0000 UTC]

The forget part I understand. Not the sex, the reason I want to have it. I use it to kill ,(myself), but I'm usually not miserable enough to want it. If I watched twilight more, I would probably want a lot of sex . I don't see much funny or good about sex.

Thank you for the fav.. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here also.

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IsolationRow In reply to RudiRueWarecorgi [2011-03-04 13:20:10 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for sharing your thoughts on this And you are very welcome fr the fav

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RudiRueWarecorgi In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-04 13:26:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem. No one else wants to hear. Is there a Brooklyn city or burrow in Australia?

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IsolationRow In reply to RudiRueWarecorgi [2011-03-04 13:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Brooklyn is in NSW near Sydney It's a suburb

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RudiRueWarecorgi In reply to IsolationRow [2011-03-04 16:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Geeez, I think I spelled bourough wrong.

I remember when I was young enough to write pretty poetry. It's a rare time in your life. I hope you're into that romance crap. It's sad when people get others to blow their load on them because: they can't find anyone else to hang out with. I've known many women more pitiful then me who were like that. I remember when I thought sex was fun and cool. Whew, was I wrong. Be glad you don't know the pain of the elderly. You'll find out soon enough if you can get past cancer and all the heart attacks.

Happy thoughts.

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pr-begs [2011-02-27 15:00:23 +0000 UTC]

poetry can only come alive when it is real to us thank you for sharing im lovin it!!!

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IsolationRow In reply to pr-begs [2011-02-27 15:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for reading

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thefiddle [2011-02-24 03:09:09 +0000 UTC]

The story of our lives. I'm sure I've felt everyone of these lines with the few men in my life. I'm liking your work. It can be both dark and pleasant. You choose nice subjects that people often keep to themselves. I'm glad you're sharing.

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IsolationRow In reply to thefiddle [2011-02-24 04:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, I'm happy to share

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Dreamspring [2011-02-23 22:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Do you have any books? Cuz' i want them all, you're a perfect writer (: please never stop doing this!

Oh.. btw.. i gave to this lyrics a kind of "rap-pop" style when reading it, it became really cool to listen

Once again, this is perfect :I

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IsolationRow In reply to Dreamspring [2011-02-24 01:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much I read it back to myself in that style and aw it's fun!
I really appreciate your feedback. Makes me want to keep writing.

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Living-Meme [2011-02-23 09:47:55 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know most of that, until now. I agree with you.

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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-02-23 09:50:50 +0000 UTC]

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Conno08 [2011-02-23 09:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!

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IsolationRow In reply to Conno08 [2011-02-23 09:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou <3

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