Comments: 15
ChibiChick137 [2011-10-13 00:51:53 +0000 UTC]
nice! and awesome job on your first fanfic on dA!
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Jubelation [2011-07-12 13:47:55 +0000 UTC]
It was really good!8D
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Frost-chan [2010-07-26 05:20:45 +0000 UTC]
I think its great! I'm a writer too so I'm going to put my fanfiction down too soon. But it probably won't be better then yours. Not by a long shot.
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anbuSquadLeader [2009-08-03 09:08:40 +0000 UTC]
Im a giant PainXKonan fan good job !
just one question,will this fan fic only involve
God realm Pain or anyother bodies including the real Nagato ?
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itsabbeyROAR [2009-07-25 06:56:10 +0000 UTC]
i love it! X333
pein and konan ftw!!! 8D
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peinsempai [2009-02-06 02:18:56 +0000 UTC]
Its fine, I have seen better. Your kind of descriptive, but even more would draw others in. And Konan acts quite odd, contemplate this and go on writing.
And no Kurolli; Peins eyes are sliver (blue tint) and Konan's are golden. You even see it in the shippuuden. :3 HA.
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Kurolli [2008-11-15 00:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Hmm~ i dont really like it i guess... Its IS good, But im just saying ive read better where the author has actually followed the characters real personalities instead of changing them completely, that bugs me somtimes~
BTW arent Peins eyes silver and konans eyes light teal?
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dei-xx [2008-07-29 02:45:41 +0000 UTC]
I like it! Awsome!
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thorne100o [2008-07-09 23:55:10 +0000 UTC]
GO PEIN X KONAN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :3
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