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Contest *Toon-doll [link]

It to draw her characters and mine in a life threatening situation, either one saving each other, fighting side by side.

Characters chosen are My two Aurora & Atlas, I was going to draw them all but sonata & Auburn didn't fit in well hehe. And her character Charming!

but whew I almost thought I wouldn't be able to finish but I just ignored my homework haha!

but now for a story may suck a little but oh well!

. . Aurora and Atlas were walking through the forrest one early morning discussing the usual topic on Atlas' mind. The ground wet slippery and wet but their hooves held strong in the slush. "so aurora you look amazingly beautiful in this. . uh. . very heavy fog." Atlas smiled. Aurora Just sighed, "yes thank you Atlas, no keep watch were almost by lake. The sun as been out the passed few day we don't want to end up on the ice." Atlas laughed, "relax. We're not even out of the trees yet." They continued until the trees opened up and normally a lake that spanned to the mountains in the far east, but in the thick fog all that could be seen was the closet small part of it. "Alright" Atlas said, "Now that we've walked to the lake, lets find some place warmer and. . you know hang out awhile" Aurora just stood silently and stared off into the distance. "uh Rora?". Still she did not speak, just continued to stare into the fog mesmerized. Finally she took a breath, in s almost shaky voice she said, "Atlas? What is that?". Atlas looked to where she stared, "What?!?" He blinked through the mist at first not seeing anything, than he saw it. "Oh my god!" taking off toward the water. He ran down the hill with Rora behind him. Reaching the edge he almost didn't stop because the slush and grass were soaked. laying half way in the water was a mare. Rora stoped in front of her and tried to wake her, "Mare? MARE!" But she did not wake. "Atlas she alive but she's freezing". "How did this happen, everyone knows not to walk on the lake after february" He responded looking around for more horses. "Maybe she's not from around here, Atlas we gotta get her out" She breathed. Atlas ran back through the woods weaving through the trees wings and legs pushing him forward, until he lifted off. He continued low looking for anything. They were still far away from home and the chances of meeting anyone out here were slim, but something had caught his eye. He strained to a stop in the air and landed by some stuff piled on the ground.

Aurora laid by the mare trying to warm her, and listening to her almost nonexistent heart beat. Aurora herd wing beats and saw Atlas landing fast by her holding rope in his mouth, "I found this in the forrest." "how are we supposed to use that?" Aurora complained, "I don't have hands!" "WE"LL be creative!"Atlas snapped. "There some knots in the rope we'll try to fasten them around each other and maybe pull her out. They had fastened the ropes around themselves and Rora was attempting to put the rope around the mare when she stepped in the water, she scream, "AHH ITS COLD!".
They had finished and were ready to pull. "Aurora are you ready?" Atlas asked. "You going to pull as hard as you can and I'm going to pull up to give her some lift." Rora readied her feet in the slush, "Alright!".. . . "Pull!" Both horses lunged. Rora was sliding in the grass, having trouble getting her footing, but the mare was inching forward. They had gotten more than half her body out. Suddenly the mare began to scream in pain, her joints were cold and it hurt to be moved, "Atlas! We're hurting her!" He just continued to heave, "I don't care" He huffed, "She needs to come out or she'll die!"

They continued to pull, trying to drown out her painful cries. Rora pulled, Atlas' strong wings beat, as hard as they could and with one last heave from both of them the mare was lying on the bank heaving with tears. Atlas came crashing to the ground heaving and Rora collapsed at the release of tension.

They had helped the mare to get to a safer position. As the morning progressed the sun began to shine thawing out the poor mare. Soon she began to talk and Aurora was bending her legs. Before night fall the mare had gotten to her feet (with help XD). She was still very weak and sick, but Aurora & Atlas helping her to walk they limped back into the woods toward their home where she'd be taken care of and warmed until she, Charming the mare, could head back to her home. ..

haha very anti climatic ending but It has to end some how, and I'm not a writer so bear with it! hehe

hope you all enjoyed it <3

First Wip: Thank all of those who help give me ideas for the background!!!! it really helped me <3

second wip:

Atlas & Aurora © ME
Charming © *Toon-doll

Description
Contest Entry

Contest *Toon-doll [link]

It to draw her characters and mine in a life threatening situation, either one saving each other, fighting side by side.

Characters chosen are My two Aurora & Atlas, I was going to draw them all but sonata & Auburn didn't fit in well hehe. And her character Charming!

but whew I almost thought I wouldn't be able to finish but I just ignored my homework haha!

but now for a story may suck a little but oh well!

. . Aurora and Atlas were walking through the forrest one early morning discussing the usual topic on Atlas' mind. The ground wet slippery and wet but their hooves held strong in the slush. "so aurora you look amazingly beautiful in this. . uh. . very heavy fog." Atlas smiled. Aurora Just sighed, "yes thank you Atlas, no keep watch were almost by lake. The sun as been out the passed few day we don't want to end up on the ice." Atlas laughed, "relax. We're not even out of the trees yet." They continued until the trees opened up and normally a lake that spanned to the mountains in the far east, but in the thick fog all that could be seen was the closet small part of it. "Alright" Atlas said, "Now that we've walked to the lake, lets find some place warmer and. . you know hang out awhile" Aurora just stood silently and stared off into the distance. "uh Rora?". Still she did not speak, just continued to stare into the fog mesmerized. Finally she took a breath, in s almost shaky voice she said, "Atlas? What is that?". Atlas looked to where she stared, "What?!?" He blinked through the mist at first not seeing anything, than he saw it. "Oh my god!" taking off toward the water. He ran down the hill with Rora behind him. Reaching the edge he almost didn't stop because the slush and grass were soaked. laying half way in the water was a mare. Rora stoped in front of her and tried to wake her, "Mare? MARE!" But she did not wake. "Atlas she alive but she's freezing". "How did this happen, everyone knows not to walk on the lake after february" He responded looking around for more horses. "Maybe she's not from around here, Atlas we gotta get her out" She breathed. Atlas ran back through the woods weaving through the trees wings and legs pushing him forward, until he lifted off. He continued low looking for anything. They were still far away from home and the chances of meeting anyone out here were slim, but something had caught his eye. He strained to a stop in the air and landed by some stuff piled on the ground.

Aurora laid by the mare trying to warm her, and listening to her almost nonexistent heart beat. Aurora herd wing beats and saw Atlas landing fast by her holding rope in his mouth, "I found this in the forrest." "how are we supposed to use that?" Aurora complained, "I don't have hands!" "WE"LL be creative!"Atlas snapped. "There some knots in the rope we'll try to fasten them around each other and maybe pull her out. They had fastened the ropes around themselves and Rora was attempting to put the rope around the mare when she stepped in the water, she scream, "AHH ITS COLD!".
They had finished and were ready to pull. "Aurora are you ready?" Atlas asked. "You going to pull as hard as you can and I'm going to pull up to give her some lift." Rora readied her feet in the slush, "Alright!".. . . "Pull!" Both horses lunged. Rora was sliding in the grass, having trouble getting her footing, but the mare was inching forward. They had gotten more than half her body out. Suddenly the mare began to scream in pain, her joints were cold and it hurt to be moved, "Atlas! We're hurting her!" He just continued to heave, "I don't care" He huffed, "She needs to come out or she'll die!"

They continued to pull, trying to drown out her painful cries. Rora pulled, Atlas' strong wings beat, as hard as they could and with one last heave from both of them the mare was lying on the bank heaving with tears. Atlas came crashing to the ground heaving and Rora collapsed at the release of tension.

They had helped the mare to get to a safer position. As the morning progressed the sun began to shine thawing out the poor mare. Soon she began to talk and Aurora was bending her legs. Before night fall the mare had gotten to her feet (with help XD). She was still very weak and sick, but Aurora & Atlas helping her to walk they limped back into the woods toward their home where she'd be taken care of and warmed until she, Charming the mare, could head back to her home. ..

haha very anti climatic ending but It has to end some how, and I'm not a writer so bear with it! hehe

hope you all enjoyed it <3

First Wip: Thank all of those who help give me ideas for the background!!!! it really helped me <3

second wip:

Atlas & Aurora © ME
Charming © *Toon-doll