ivor121 In reply to kilobugg [2015-05-27 05:44:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kilobugg, Lots more action ahead, thanks for reading.
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ivor121 In reply to applenerd1 [2015-05-10 17:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Hi applenerd,
So glad you are enjoying my story, There will be a lot more like chapter five and a lot more ground level point of views. I should be posting Cory's story shortly. Lots more interaction between the Earth people and the Boys ahead. (sneak preview; in chapter seven, Yelid makes a friend.)
I have negative thoughts about coiled fist. For one, they freak out if you mention the word "boy" (so I have been told by members of my Yahoo group) likewise, I have not had good experience with writing.com. My Yahoo group and Deviant are the best places I have found so far, in presenting my works.
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