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EDIT: alright, u think I should redo this? or do u think it wont make a difference? (well, I wont make razors teeth black. I don't know how that happened XD)
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Razor layed low and slowly crawled across the tall grassy savannah. right in the middle of his path, was a massive saber-toothed tiger. he just sat there; the dead bodies of dire wolves (that arent shown) layed everywhere. his bright green eyes shone bright in the moonlight.
razor growled. he didnt look too bad. he slowly crept up on it, until he sneezed.
the tiger looked up and growled. razor stayed still, hardly breathing. the tiger shook his massave head and just stood there, daydreaming. razor looked around for more saber-tooth beasts. none were around. he crept a little closer. he got into a pouncing position and jumped very high and just before he landed on the creature, his pupils dissapeared and eyes glowed brighter. he let out a massave roar and the tiger let out a youw of suprise and pain as razors teeth sank deeply into its flank. the saber-toothed tiger quickly recovered and glared at razor as he roared back. the tiger rolled over and tried to crush him, but razor used all his strenth to throw him off. they poth got up, panting, glaring at each other. then the tiger lunged at him, and razor dove under him and raked his claws under the saber-toothed tigers stomache. the cut was extremly deep. he caught a small glimpse of the insides of the masssive cat. the tiger shreiked in rage and pain and fell over. razor glared at it and shook the blood from his paws.
"pathetic that a big pretator like you lost to something a bit smaller like me." Razor snarled.
and without another word, her stalked off.
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Dire wolf OC! His names Razor
hes a loner, hes aniti-scoal, aggresssive, and rude.
his only friend is Bearclaw, but he's not in here

Description
EDIT: alright, u think I should redo this? or do u think it wont make a difference? (well, I wont make razors teeth black. I don't know how that happened XD)
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Razor layed low and slowly crawled across the tall grassy savannah. right in the middle of his path, was a massive saber-toothed tiger. he just sat there; the dead bodies of dire wolves (that arent shown) layed everywhere. his bright green eyes shone bright in the moonlight.
razor growled. he didnt look too bad. he slowly crept up on it, until he sneezed.
the tiger looked up and growled. razor stayed still, hardly breathing. the tiger shook his massave head and just stood there, daydreaming. razor looked around for more saber-tooth beasts. none were around. he crept a little closer. he got into a pouncing position and jumped very high and just before he landed on the creature, his pupils dissapeared and eyes glowed brighter. he let out a massave roar and the tiger let out a youw of suprise and pain as razors teeth sank deeply into its flank. the saber-toothed tiger quickly recovered and glared at razor as he roared back. the tiger rolled over and tried to crush him, but razor used all his strenth to throw him off. they poth got up, panting, glaring at each other. then the tiger lunged at him, and razor dove under him and raked his claws under the saber-toothed tigers stomache. the cut was extremly deep. he caught a small glimpse of the insides of the masssive cat. the tiger shreiked in rage and pain and fell over. razor glared at it and shook the blood from his paws.
"pathetic that a big pretator like you lost to something a bit smaller like me." Razor snarled.
and without another word, her stalked off.
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Dire wolf OC! His names Razor
hes a loner, hes aniti-scoal, aggresssive, and rude.
his only friend is Bearclaw, but he's not in here