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ixiblix — If It Never Happened...
Published: 2005-12-19 02:38:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Forever....
Strong,Loving, and Jubilant...
All things are love used to be.
Like a caged bird openly set free
Are all things of what our love used to be...
If only it never happened

Different...
Unusual,Strange, and Distant...
How you seemed after a couple months to me.
Resembling a balloon slowly defloating
All in entirely what you seemed like after a few months to me...
If only it never happened

Shattered...
Distressed,Heartbroken and Rejected...
What I was when you left me yet again.
Like a forgotten pet left out in the pouring rain
What I was when you left me,yet again....
If only...it never happened
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Comments: 12

xThexDarkxPoetx [2007-10-14 19:31:05 +0000 UTC]

I like this one
It have structure...
Though some poetic commas could be added, to spice it up...
For example "Like a caged bird openly set free" to "Like a caged bird, openly set free"
It's a sad poem and it did touch me...
Really beautiful...

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ixiblix In reply to xThexDarkxPoetx [2007-10-14 19:44:05 +0000 UTC]

hehe,I see you like writing to have structure XD
hmm,never thought about "poetic commas";I like that idea and will probably use it now.
I'm glad you like it and that it touched you;it's very inspiring.

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xThexDarkxPoetx In reply to ixiblix [2007-10-14 21:06:54 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you will
Poetic commas might just give your sentence more structure, give a little spice and might make understanding easier
And yeah, I like structure, but I don't require it

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dragonpricness [2006-12-29 19:18:53 +0000 UTC]

o

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dragonpricness [2006-12-29 18:41:18 +0000 UTC]

look on the happy side. what is the poem about.
1. someone dieing
or
2. breakups?

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ixiblix In reply to dragonpricness [2006-12-29 19:07:06 +0000 UTC]

whatever you think.^^

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dragonpricness [2006-12-29 17:57:04 +0000 UTC]

did you see my art? what pic do you like?

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dragonpricness [2006-12-29 17:00:04 +0000 UTC]

thats so sad, i think im gona shed a tear now. faving it by the way. also, it does hurt when stuff like that happens but, life is too long to frown your way through.

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ixiblix In reply to dragonpricness [2006-12-29 17:35:54 +0000 UTC]

yay,I know.I'm glad I'm over it now...I think

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Kimikotsu [2005-12-19 23:09:28 +0000 UTC]

O_O HOLY SHIT!!!!! THATS SOOOO GOOODD1!!!!!!!! *bows before her* Teach me!!!!

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nothought [2005-12-19 02:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice job. I like this, the style is neat.
My only suggestion, is to use different punctuation for the first and second lines...

"Foreveror -)
Strong, Loving, and Jubilant;
All things are love used to be."

Great work though.

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ixiblix In reply to nothought [2005-12-19 02:45:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!will take note of your advice! ^^

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