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lDestiny [2016-06-04 09:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Hello!
I'm from ProjectComment and I really liked how this piece looked from the thumbnail, so I decided to share my thoughts on it
First Impression
From the thumbnail, it was easily recognizable. You have a very good foundation when it comes to drawing what you see. Overall, you captured all the details of his features well and the expression is his eyes look fierce and alive!
What can use improvement
- Rendering the skin tone under 1 specific light source: It’s hard to tell where the light is mainly coming from due to the white areas on his face. On the reference, the light is coming from the left of Hook’s face (our right in the picture). Only the very edges of the left side of his face should be the brightest, while the right side of his (closest to the viewer and furthest from light) should be less bright. I highly recommend this awesome tutorial about the rules of lighting (although it’s with digital painting, what he explains is applicable with any medium): www.youtube.com/watch?v=tx-Twk… ; It’s a bit long (and only the first part is free), but it explains the essentials very well and even only this first part is enough to make it look even more realistic.
- Because his mouth is too short, it makes his face look a bit odd. The mouth doesn’t look like it’s in the same plane as the rest of his features - it looks more like the mouth is seen from the front while the rest of his features are in the 3/4 position.
I just took a look through the rest of your gallery and you got it done very well here: fav.me/d9znqzx and… Woah! Especially here fav.me/da36hpz
I’m writing this comment as I go through your work and the improvements in each new piece is clear! The skin texture and hair are well defined and the lighting has good variation. The features of Emma’s face are in proper proportions and everything about their heads, face and clothes are rendered very realistically. It’s a huge difference from this earlier piece here!
In your latest work, you captured the realism extremely well! And judging from the dates they were uploaded, you improved tremendously within the same week that you did both pieces!
Final Thoughts
So after seeing your latest piece I think you just might have had more difficulty with this one here than usual at the time and that you’re doing very very well! I think if you did this piece again (or a similar one) it would be even better! You’re latest piece is proof of that! Just keep at it!
I hope my comment was somewhat useful (sorry I wrote a wall of text^^). Keep up the awesome work!
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J-Cody In reply to o0w0o [2016-05-31 16:28:53 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I have been attempting realism lately but this was just a practice piece so my personal style bled into it a bit. I haven't tried a black pencil on white, but I have tried white pencil on black paper which was amazing to try. It came out rather well once you get over the anatomy issues. I'm still studying perception and anatomy so your critique helps a lot. Here is the reference photo. c-odonoghue.com/pictures/displ…
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J-Cody In reply to pawcanada [2016-05-31 23:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Hello and thank you for taking time to critique my art! The collar of his coat drove me crazy as well as the nose. I had a hard time trying to get a realistic nose with the colored pencil that the nose that he currently has was one of those 'it just happened, any more fixing will make it worse' kind of things. I've added a link to the original picture if you wish to compare.
I'm really enjoying the greyscale. I originally started it as a new technique I was learning in preparation to add color but I loved the grey way too much to alter it. I might have to draw something I do not like in order to color it.
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pawcanada In reply to J-Cody [2016-06-04 21:12:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
I get you. It's a pain when that sort of thing happens and to be honest it's why I champion the phrase "Done is better than perfect" when I'm working on my own art. Sometimes you just have to roll with something, especially if - as you said - fixing will make it worse.
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Okami-Kitsune03 [2016-05-28 05:30:42 +0000 UTC]
super good, i love it X3
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J-Cody In reply to Okami-Kitsune03 [2016-05-28 11:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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JMFAnimations8 [2016-05-26 18:21:10 +0000 UTC]
I personally like simple backgrounds, it does not distract from the center of attention. This is really good and the approach you took to make this was skillful.
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J-Cody In reply to JMFAnimations8 [2016-05-27 00:45:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I was testing out a new technique with my prismacolors. The background was just filler but I did like the shade of grey I used.
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JMFAnimations8 In reply to J-Cody [2016-05-27 04:56:57 +0000 UTC]
It was nice work, you are very welcome.
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DominicTheRaccoon [2016-05-26 17:51:13 +0000 UTC]
It astounds me with how detailed this is!
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Watcher-Magic [2016-05-26 15:12:48 +0000 UTC]
I love this a ton. Well done!
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J-Cody In reply to Watcher-Magic [2016-05-27 00:48:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm happy you love it and thank you! It was fun to draw.
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CYSYS8993 [2016-05-26 14:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Nice realism there.
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J-Cody In reply to CYSYS8993 [2016-05-27 00:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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iridodictyum [2016-05-26 14:23:24 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you draw the face and the expression, it communicates the expression clearly but not too forcefully. Well done!
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J-Cody In reply to iridodictyum [2016-05-27 00:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! His expression was the bed part of drawing this.
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ThermidorResistance [2016-05-26 14:15:04 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh I love this! It looks like a photo!
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J-Cody In reply to ThermidorResistance [2016-05-27 00:50:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I'm trying to work toward hyperrealism so maybe one day this will pale in comparison
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RickAnderlyne87 [2016-05-26 14:01:47 +0000 UTC]
This is the best thing
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Pai813 [2016-05-26 12:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Oh my goodness you've blown me away AGAIN! XD
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denisole [2016-05-26 12:28:21 +0000 UTC]
Is there a two main light sources one from left another one from right ? It is nice piece of work, but light for me now is little bit too much. Materiality of work looks good.
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J-Cody In reply to denisole [2016-05-27 00:55:34 +0000 UTC]
Yes there is two light sources. I tried to show one as a bit weaker. Light sources can be fun to play with but I often have to study a photo for a good while to get it down pat.
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little-artist2803 [2016-05-26 12:01:15 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, I'm not one for realistic drawings, but this blew my MIND!! How can you do so well with just a pencil and sheet of paper?!?! You have mad skill!! Keep up the work!
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