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Published: 2013-12-20 09:39:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 457; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 1
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Request for (kiriban was caught)I tried to make drawing's atmosphere more misterious (dark colors, unnatural lights) but the result is Jerodh doesn't look like Jerodh т__т((
The kiribans are still open, the last one is 237 deviations (btw this one is 231st 
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Hello! Very nice work!
Here's some advice:
Technique:
Technique is good, you surely know how to use tablet, how to make shadows and highlights e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Anatomy:
Overall proportions are good, but face looks a little flat. I suppose it can be cured wit deeper shadows.
Left eye is looking strange, it almost leaves the skull.
The position of the right eye is unclear a little. It must be deepened in the skull, so the area between eye and eyebrow, and nose will be shaded. Good job with lips, they are in place and look good.
Ear looks a bit strange. You can practice drawing it from reference. I'd also make it a bit higher.
The muscle that comes down from the ear must be more thick to support head effectively. It connects straight to the clavicle.
I'd also make backgroung on the left darker, so the character would not blend with it.
Composition:
In general it's very unclear what's happening. Why is he looking at the glowing dots? What are they? Where is he? Maybe it's better to answer these questions before starting the illustration, so you will come with much more interesting composition, like "He's going through the creepy forest to an old small inn, the moon is full, and strange unexplainable lights can be seen far in the fores the trees".
Hope this would be useful! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Аеее, целая куча прекрасных советов *w* в следующий раз я уделю больше внимания этой грудино-ключичной мышце и глазам, покидающим череп. Вообще онотоме рисую лажово всегда, даже когда пялюсь в референсы, и подробный разбор всех ошибок мне необходим, вот. Поэтому большое спасибо, что пожертвовали своим временем и помогли мне
а "что тут происходит" понятно только двум людям, ибо рисовалось не для всех, а только для человека, чей перс тут собсна и есть))
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This is really good! I love the distribution of light!
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*Uncontrollably squeals*
I love it so much, you have no idea.
I have to go to school, I'll praise you better when I get back home! <3 <3
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it
Good luck in school
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Okay, back from school.
I must say, this is like the closest image of Jerodh I've ever gotten or seen that actually looks like how I see him in my head.
I mean, he doesn't look like some adult asshole like a lot of people may see him as, but like a confused child forced to see too much.
I love how young in the body in the body he looks, but he looks like he has some wisdom and I just- agh.
I can't even tell you how much I love this.
This really brightened up my week, like wow.
I love it- thank you so so much.
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Omg I didn't think it is nice drawing *.* I guided some pics with Jerodh in your gallery and I was nervous 'cause I was sure Jerodh didn't come out as he is. But I'm really happy you love the result *w* Thank you very much!!
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