Desertderp [2017-09-20 04:40:38 +0000 UTC]
I really liked this story and I think it's for the best that Sayoko didn't get decapitated. Also, was Sayoko barefoot?
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WarFalcon [2010-10-08 00:43:38 +0000 UTC]
The head removal was just for the part was just what I could come up with when asked how to finish it. Seems you were able to figure it out on your own quite well and did actually do her justice. You actually managed to have her do something people would not assume she would do which was a forced drowning and a death by water when she usually kills by fire. This put a fresh spin on the character. Interesting that there are views from both characters in this. Wish I was a comic artist as I could have had a grand old time actually drawing the whole fight since it worked quite well for that. A great script that I wish I could actually view in real time, especially to see Abi-Hime's HUGE boobs jiggle as she fought, lol. Would not be surprised if her top came off as a result of that mid-fight. Oh, love the use of irony on the necklace, hehe, you can have it but you gotta die first, lol.
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