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jaatel — Lonely Together
Published: 2003-08-14 00:37:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 30
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Staring at your computer screen,Holding onto stuff that's been.
Staying up in the quiet night,
Your life never seems quite right.
You look up at the starless sky,
All you want to know is why.
Don't want to feel, don't want to sleep.
Your want to be loved runs real deep.
I look up on a cloudy day,
Th one I live lives far away.
No one here to numb my pain
You can't see my tears in the rain.
I go inside, i'm soaking wet,
All my former loves I want to forget.
I fight endless battles no one dreams of.
The war will be won only with your love.
You decide to start a drawing
At your desk, you have been pawing.
You throw the pencil under your bed
No one could ever know what's in your head.
I feel emptiness in my heart
An empty role that'd be your part.
Thinking, I stare at the ceiling and wall.
If I had your number, I would call.
I'd get on a plane and leave this place.
I'd go a million miles to see your face.
I'd find you and hold you forever,
If we were lonely, we'd be lonely together.
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Comments: 8
This is such a beautiful poem... u guys must really mean a lot to each other... that's so sweet... i wish i had someone like that 
good job though
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Browsed through all your emotional poems and stopped at this again. I've to admit that I had a few tears in my eyes. It's so beautiful! It's so sweet. Be sure that you mean a lot to me. Be sure that I wait every day for you to come online again. These five days without ann note was so horrible. Nevertheless the thoughts about you give me power. They say "He'll be on some time". Well - that's it! Take care and please write a note to me whenever you are on again...
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Man... do I know how THIS feels. I love this peice - it's got a great rhyme scheme, is pretty easy to understand (maybe just because I've been in your place as well, and I know what it's like to be hundreds of miles away from someone that you love, be it a friend or more) and Yeah, had a great flow. 
Staring at your computer screen,
Holding onto stuff that's been.
Staying up in the quiet night,
Your life never seems quite right.
I do that way much too often...
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dude, brilliant. holy cow i wish i had written this. awesome job
"I'd find you and hold you forever,
If we were lonely, we'd be lonely together."
that part is the best thing i've read all day. it's so damn catchy! 
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Hey you submitted it! It's such a beautiful poem - full of emotions. It's curious what people want to do if they found the person they were looking for...
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that is a beautiful poem!!! sometimes i feel lonely too, and i like how you created that image at the very beginning
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