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n o t h i n g . m o r e . r e l a x i n g . t h a t . t o . b e . a t . t h e . s e a s i d e ...Β© COPYRIGHT JosΓ© Calheiros
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I got another Critique from Rachael and i thank you so much for that.
It is really nice to know what people think about our work and how they saw in it and you did it very well, you saw what i think when i take the photo, the irony of teh seaside in the middle of the city and how they are looking in another direction all of them.
It was that moment that i saw and click
Thank you
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Letβs start with the most obvious: three men on a bench near the beach. But is it three men or four men? From your picture we cannot tell. There seems to be an elbow off the back of the bench. Now unless this was deliberate for some strange reason, which I cannot divine, move to the side enough that we can tell for ourselves, and please, in any case, let us see the man in the back. You needed to move perhaps two feet to do so. Were you so busy framing the word βSeasideβ that you could not check to see if everyone was visible?
Aside from that, the picture is OK. It is good that they are all looking in the same general direction. The picture is decent but nothing really special. Could it have been with a bit more work? We will never know. Yes, I know everyone has different taste, so somewhere you can find someone who will positively love this picture.
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Hello Philip
I can accept your critique because we must respect all the ipinoons but i could not accept that is fair.
If you are a street photographer and you aren't because i visit your gallery you will see that there are moments in life and those moments just are seconds if you are walking as me and saw the irony of the seaside word with the men on the bench loking to the other side and no sea at all in the middle of the city you must think, frame and click in a fraction of a second.
If you move two feet to do what you think IS MORE important on the photo, 3 or 4 man maybe you will lost everything, and for me if you see the 3 or if they are 4 is not important at all in these case
And yes i got 52 faves/people that like the photo, 8 comments and a critique that also like the photo, so i am happy there are people that like it and i always try to do my best in my photo maybe that is why i have 9 DD's more tahn 160.000 visits and more than 3000 watchers...
And thank you for your words even i don'r agree at all
Enjoy your time and all the best to you
Make great photos
Best regards
JosΓ©
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I have done a lot of street photography (if you mean situations where you must react without planning). I have not submitted any because they usually turn out much poorer than planned photographed. The idea is to think ahead and plan what to do just if you turn the corner and you see a great situation. Then your reactions will be more under control and your result will be better. Otherwise, they will all be 'might-have-been'.Β
If you just want people to like everything you do, ask you friends to be your 'critics', but don't expect to learn.
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So was i can see i will not learn with you because the results of your street photography are not good.
Of course i want to learn, but not with a critique that don't see what is the idea of the photo and only want to see if they are 3 or 4
And i am not the type o man that would ask my friends to critique my photos and as i told you i accept your critique but i don't think it's fair
I made street photos for more than forty years and i also work for magazines, o i can think i do something good
Enjoy Easter
JosΓ©
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they did it!they went to the seaside)oh, their summer was not in vain)
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f o r . s u r e . t h e y . d i d .
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t o . b e . a t . t h e . s e a s i d e .
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nice catch JosΓ©
nothing better than to be somewhere else
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t h a n k . y o u .
r i g h t . 
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This is a wonderful photo, so ironic, and so well composed and conceived. Bravo JosΓ©!
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t h a n k . y o u . s o . m u c h .
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wow! Β this is really great moment.. i reallly like the composition..
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t h a n k . y o u . s o . m u c h . Mert .
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The seemed to be very much tensed...
Nice capture, love the B&W!Β
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esta Γ© daquelas fantΓ‘sticas... 
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e s t e . Γ© . u m . d a q u e l e s . m u i t o . o b r i g a d o / g r a z i e
j Γ‘ . c Γ‘ . e s t o u .
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olha olha ! viva!
e logo tambΓ©m vou estar aΓ...
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a . s Γ© r i o ?
e . e u . v o u . e m b o r a ...
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m a i s . u m . d e s e n c o n t r o ...
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y o u . d o n ' t . s e e . i t ?
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j u s t . o n . t h e . l e f t .
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f o r . s u r e .
a b r a Γ§ o
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Like thinking cool in the middle of July.
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I love street shots with strong graphical elements in them. Good job.
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t h a n k . y o u . m y . f r i e n d .
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h e h e . a n d . w i t h . t h e . s e a .
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