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Published: 2010-10-11 13:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 33957; Favourites: 541; Downloads: 86
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Your untamed soft hands touch me in ways I always crave for,Tease me in sweet ways I could never prepare for,
Hold me in between like I am the only one,
And always distract me unexpectedly when we kiss.
I can feel your love in the movement of your lips,
A total warm pleasantness as you cling to me.
And maybe a small part of my mind actually registers the surprise,
As your warm hands reach curiously for more.
In sweetness your love blinds me,
In my heart your love completes me,
Come tomorrow I hope you'll still crave me,
And oh, I think I'm in love with you, completely.
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A very nice poem indeed. I loved it alot on how you used "sweet" in a way that goes in way with a relationship.
I do poetry myself and I was wondering if you could take sometime and look at some of them and tell me what you think of them.
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you have seen and tried to capture both the goods and bads of love out of something not entirely in your own control.
let your poems transpire not only the beautiful, but also the treasuring good things those who do not have it or have it anymore could enjoy. do something good with your ability, and keep honing your skills to separate and preserve the valuable from the invaluable, until they do more than just inpire like a sparkle of a midnight star, more majestic than a storm at sea, happier than any miracle, devoid of suffering and falls, where only the worthy love is spoken in the world today where you will often find writings of special love. We all know love is special. But you can definitely make big differences by burning the forgotten wrong and describing a collection of things that truly could keep someone, anyone from ever giving up.
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oh wow exatly how i feel about my boyfriend
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I love this its beautiful and so easy to relate too. I am just sorry that there are so many immature and petty people with so much time on their hands as to cause drama over things like this. Its sad really...they must be very lonely and pathetic people. The poem was lovely and the full written explanation amused me a lot. Ill be checking out more of your work for sure!
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Lol okay this comment definitely made me laugh, and I'm having not quite a restful morning at all *grins* Thank you for this.
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thank you for taking your time to leave this wonderful feedback 
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your most welcome , beautiful work.
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I've been looking through deviant art and I kept finding all these beautiful pieces of writing and they've all been by you. Very good job, keep writing so I can keep reading.
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Thank you so much for taking your time to leave this wonderful feedback!
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I love this. I definitely think that in a relationship being "teased" is a common feeling, in whatever way.
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I am so happy you do! *smiles*
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Thank you for taking your time in leaving this positive feedback
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no problem
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It's a beautiful poem...It is so simple but speaks volumes to anyone who can understand poetry and even more so to those that understand love.
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Wow, that is a comment that definitely speaks volumes to anyone who can understand compliment and even more so to those that can understand appreciation! lol 
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You are very welcome^^
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I'm so happy you do!
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I really like the poem. I had someone like that in my life once. Another lifetime ago. You did a very good job bringing those thoughts and feelings back.
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*smiles* Thank you, very much
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I'm putting together a collection of poems about anonymous love notes that this seems to fit the bill. May I use it?
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no
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It already is, but in retrospect it's not what I'm looking for. *smiles*
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Im glad u were able to find ur love I hope I can do the same one day but Ive only experienced it for a short time so far
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*smiles* Sometimes it's more of recognizing it than finding it
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True *p.s. sorry for the late response*
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Okay, so firstly: Trolls suck and good writers like you should never be brought down by them (though that you tried to answer his idiotic questions shows great wisdom, so, props) and secondly: this poem is awesome. Love poems are harder to write than most people think they are, and this one is passionate and atmospheric without being narmy or cliche. So, in conclusion: Rock. On.
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Lol wow thank you so much for such an encouraging and supportive comment. You have no idea how much I appreciate you in taking your time to share this.
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Awwww, nothing better than a man with a soft heart with a knack for writing! 
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*laughs* nothing better than an appreciative gesture. thank you for taking your time in leaving this wonderful comment!
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thank you thank you so much!
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