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Published: 2010-10-04 17:36:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 10647; Favourites: 289; Downloads: 40
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Description I love the way you tease,
With your finger tips on my back,
Breathing hushed whispers of things I could only dream at night.

I love the way your touch makes me freeze in my steps:
Swaying between the need to stand still,
And the temptation to shudder in mindless ways.

If only you could stop teasing for even a moment,
A moment for me to try to collect my mind,
Then I could show you just how much it means for your love to be mine.
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Comments: 257

Scr1b3 [2013-02-19 02:04:02 +0000 UTC]

First, I would retaliate in a way that would drive them crazy, then, I would plot some dastardly evil that I would only unleash when they were asleep

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jackiewelles In reply to Scr1b3 [2013-03-11 07:29:47 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thank you for taking your time in sharing this! lol

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Scr1b3 In reply to jackiewelles [2013-03-11 20:38:45 +0000 UTC]

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BrokenHearted756 [2012-09-12 17:53:45 +0000 UTC]

I actually do both... waiting to catch him off guard is my favorite though haha

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jackiewelles In reply to BrokenHearted756 [2012-09-16 18:37:29 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* That is just sweet! Thank you for taking your time in sharing this

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DriftingDrifter [2012-02-07 04:42:03 +0000 UTC]

You fucking suck at poetry. This has no rhythm or feeling at all. You may know what love is, but this poem DOES NOT convey it.

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Just-living In reply to DriftingDrifter [2012-06-14 03:35:57 +0000 UTC]

wow..

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jackiewelles In reply to DriftingDrifter [2012-02-19 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL Sorry!

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phE4st [2011-12-27 08:58:49 +0000 UTC]

excellent!!!

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jackiewelles In reply to phE4st [2011-12-31 22:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for taking your time in leaving feedback!

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LellowRosexx [2011-08-31 02:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Nawh that's purty orsum (:

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jackiewelles In reply to LellowRosexx [2011-10-11 13:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Lol thank you!

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RadicalRose [2011-01-11 03:32:37 +0000 UTC]

later to catch them off guard

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jackiewelles In reply to RadicalRose [2011-01-11 08:44:35 +0000 UTC]

*grins* Thank you for taking your time in leaving this comment!

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RadicalRose In reply to jackiewelles [2011-01-11 09:14:56 +0000 UTC]

*smiles widely*

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PagesOfDreams [2010-12-23 18:00:03 +0000 UTC]

I love the way your touch makes me freeze in my steps:
Swaying between the need to stand still,
And the temptation to shudder in mindless ways.

My favorite part!

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jackiewelles In reply to PagesOfDreams [2010-12-23 22:05:01 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* You, reviewing weeks old poems of mine again! *grins*

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PagesOfDreams In reply to jackiewelles [2010-12-24 14:28:56 +0000 UTC]

My deviations are backed up. I'm glad it makes you feel warm and fuzzy.

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shipori [2010-12-17 06:44:48 +0000 UTC]

lol, my bf does exactly tht, and i try to get him bk but it nvr works lol, i love him, evn tho he always wins lol, ths poem iz amazing, i love it

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jackiewelles In reply to shipori [2010-12-19 05:02:27 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* I'm happy you do!

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amylee103008 [2010-12-02 05:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Love it! So deep, and to answer you question, i think i'd wait until i'd get them off guard.

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jackiewelles In reply to amylee103008 [2010-12-02 05:47:35 +0000 UTC]

*grins slyly*

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xXrainbowbowzXx [2010-11-27 04:44:50 +0000 UTC]

did you ever think of making a song outa these?

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jackiewelles In reply to xXrainbowbowzXx [2010-11-27 06:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, when I listened to some Jack Johnson songs once

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xXrainbowbowzXx In reply to jackiewelles [2010-11-28 00:04:52 +0000 UTC]

cool cool

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myfang4ever [2010-11-11 23:51:08 +0000 UTC]

i love it

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jackiewelles In reply to myfang4ever [2010-11-12 00:02:26 +0000 UTC]

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myfang4ever In reply to jackiewelles [2010-11-12 12:10:09 +0000 UTC]

wats that

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doglover3212 [2010-11-06 17:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Good job. I really like this.

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jackiewelles In reply to doglover3212 [2010-11-06 18:41:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy you do! Thank you for taking your time in leaving a comment!

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doglover3212 In reply to jackiewelles [2010-11-06 21:58:57 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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pixie-chan-bleh [2010-11-06 16:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha..definitely better than mine..and I quite love it ....you're a gr8 writer!

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jackiewelles In reply to pixie-chan-bleh [2010-11-06 16:40:28 +0000 UTC]

*blushes deeply* I'm happy you like this writing

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pixie-chan-bleh In reply to jackiewelles [2010-11-06 16:54:08 +0000 UTC]

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looFsydoboN [2010-10-31 06:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful - straight forward, direct capture of a scene, while still conveying an intensity.
I think "Love Revenge" is an excellent title.
As far as teasing - catching off guard is the way to go!

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jackiewelles In reply to looFsydoboN [2010-10-31 13:38:52 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* Thank you for taking your time in leaving this note!

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halfangelrisesagain [2010-10-31 05:08:15 +0000 UTC]

This piece has been featured in my latest journal entry for the support that you have shown.

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jackiewelles In reply to halfangelrisesagain [2010-10-31 13:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so much!!!

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halfangelrisesagain In reply to jackiewelles [2010-10-31 15:23:10 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!

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phoenixfire420 [2010-10-24 16:59:28 +0000 UTC]

i think its wonderful.

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jackiewelles In reply to phoenixfire420 [2010-10-24 17:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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phoenixfire420 [2010-10-24 10:30:40 +0000 UTC]

beautifully writen...

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jackiewelles In reply to phoenixfire420 [2010-10-24 17:59:40 +0000 UTC]

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kataragirl27 [2010-10-23 00:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem But to be honest I would do both. because one you can get them when its the right time and 2 there not expecting it And this has happen to me but I was only crushing...and nothing ever happened except good friends..but now idk what to think of me and him... But lovely poem once again..and keep up the good work.

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jackiewelles In reply to kataragirl27 [2010-10-23 00:01:38 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* You are so sweet and fair

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kataragirl27 In reply to jackiewelles [2010-10-23 00:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Well you write lovely poetry

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Darkvampyre123 [2010-10-17 20:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Aww sweet

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jackiewelles In reply to Darkvampyre123 [2010-10-18 04:21:19 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* Im happy you think so!

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Lite-up [2010-10-14 21:56:31 +0000 UTC]

I like it just Love Revenge.

To be teased, it to be given a glass of wine and have only a sip. Not being able to have the rest. To tease them then, or later; I would give them a taste there, but walk off only to come back later. *smiles*

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jackiewelles In reply to Lite-up [2010-10-14 23:07:54 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* Thank you for taking your time to leave this comment and to share this with me *grins*

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