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Published: 2012-03-20 20:47:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 5678; Favourites: 213; Downloads: 526
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Description (Howl into my ear;
give me your claws.
I want the animal in you;

in you I shall nest.)

Take your clothes off, take them off for me.
Let me see the scars and the marks,
those dark moles and faint sun spots.

I want to memorize the way your fur grows.
I want to tickle my cheeks with your goose bumps.
Let me count the bruises and the cuts.

I'll bless them with names;
I'll lick away the blood stains.
We can lie skin to skin for days.

I have enough kisses for your brows and lashes,
for nails, teeth and toes, for thighs and knees;
in your curves and dents I'll nuzzle my nose.

Let me see your skin dance.
Through and around; your every breath performs,
through and around, an ancient holy chant.

I don't want your dreams; forget the ifs and the maybes.
All those regrets you carry are nothing but sad stories.
You don't have to utter a single word;

your body holds all the promises.
Don't tell me any secrets, hold your confessions;
just take your clothes off, take them off for me.

Β© 2012 melekelif
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jackrough In reply to ??? [2012-12-04 15:00:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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VMenFangirl [2012-12-03 08:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!!

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jackrough In reply to VMenFangirl [2012-12-04 15:00:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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VMenFangirl In reply to jackrough [2013-01-29 07:53:34 +0000 UTC]

youΒ΄re welcome!

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sonefire [2012-12-03 07:23:42 +0000 UTC]

you did a magnifficent job on that,
keep up the good work,

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jackrough In reply to sonefire [2012-12-04 14:59:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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sonefire In reply to jackrough [2012-12-04 22:03:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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chip667 [2012-12-03 05:57:23 +0000 UTC]

This is good. Gave me chills. lol Keep up the good work!!

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jackrough In reply to chip667 [2012-12-04 14:59:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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chip667 In reply to jackrough [2012-12-05 19:34:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Kageaki [2012-12-03 03:45:32 +0000 UTC]

nice lines

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jackrough In reply to Kageaki [2012-12-04 14:59:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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lupawolf87 [2012-12-03 02:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, this gave me chills.

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jackrough In reply to lupawolf87 [2012-12-04 14:57:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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SuperFanLoveraxl [2012-12-03 02:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous work~!

How do you do it~?

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jackrough In reply to SuperFanLoveraxl [2012-12-04 14:57:39 +0000 UTC]

i believe the question is a rhetorical one, no? if not, i don't have a proper answer i'm afraid.

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SuperFanLoveraxl In reply to jackrough [2012-12-04 21:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Both yes, and no~!^^ XD

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jackrough In reply to SuperFanLoveraxl [2012-12-04 14:56:39 +0000 UTC]

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SuperFanLoveraxl In reply to jackrough [2012-12-04 21:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Still love it~!^^ XD

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Acydia [2012-12-03 00:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous poem. The only thing that took me out of it was all those lower case "I"s dotted around. Finicky brain.

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jackrough In reply to Acydia [2013-01-08 13:27:24 +0000 UTC]

the dots are gone.

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jackrough In reply to Acydia [2012-12-04 14:56:16 +0000 UTC]

i have issues with capitalizing. i rarely do it unless it is formal writing. sometimes i go back to make it all proper and nice, but only sometimes. thank you.

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JashinsAngel [2012-12-02 23:51:48 +0000 UTC]

This perfectly conveys how I feel inside.

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jackrough In reply to JashinsAngel [2012-12-04 14:53:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the comment.

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magdalenamariposa [2012-12-02 23:14:51 +0000 UTC]

nice but i'd rather long for human soul over animalistic quality... seems too base to be true love and a little too clichΓ© to be poetic. but, to each his own i guess

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jackrough In reply to magdalenamariposa [2012-12-04 14:52:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the comment.

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stealthyninja21 [2012-12-02 21:47:30 +0000 UTC]

wow, it is "raw and rough"
nicely done

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jackrough In reply to stealthyninja21 [2012-12-04 14:52:32 +0000 UTC]

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xblackxbloodxrosex [2012-12-02 20:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Its a dark and sexy poem that reads as such but tells more than what is written in words. It tells a story and makes a request. Amazing!!!!

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jackrough In reply to xblackxbloodxrosex [2012-12-04 14:52:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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Catmicas [2012-12-02 20:44:19 +0000 UTC]

reallly good

"howl into my ear;
give me your claws.
i want the animal in you"
"let me see the scars and the marks" sooo coool

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jackrough In reply to Catmicas [2012-12-04 14:52:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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Gothinha [2012-12-02 19:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Made me shiver! Amazing work

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jackrough In reply to Gothinha [2012-12-02 20:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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nykol-haebrd [2012-12-02 19:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Nice piece of writing here

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jackrough In reply to nykol-haebrd [2012-12-02 20:15:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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nykol-haebrd In reply to jackrough [2012-12-03 06:03:40 +0000 UTC]

no prob ^_^

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Coriacea [2012-12-02 15:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, that's good stuff, kiddo. Congrats on the DD!

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jackrough In reply to Coriacea [2012-12-02 20:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Coriacea In reply to jackrough [2012-12-02 21:11:09 +0000 UTC]

You're incredibly welcome.

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Pandpuffs [2012-12-02 15:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow...impressive.

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jackrough In reply to Pandpuffs [2012-12-02 20:16:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Lintu47 [2012-12-02 10:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the well deserved DD!
Have a nice day! : )

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jackrough In reply to Lintu47 [2012-12-02 20:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I wish thee a good week.

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Lintu47 In reply to jackrough [2012-12-02 20:28:46 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, you too

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a7xerfoREVer [2012-12-02 09:47:25 +0000 UTC]

let me count the bruises and the cuts / i'll bless them with names
eep. love this thing so much, well-deserved dd. (:

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jackrough In reply to a7xerfoREVer [2012-12-02 20:17:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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brassteeth [2012-12-02 08:21:37 +0000 UTC]

"let me see your skin dance"
Wonderful. Congratulations on your D.D!!

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jackrough In reply to brassteeth [2012-12-02 20:17:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Postmorteum [2012-07-24 15:56:23 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing.

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