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Jacob-plz — A Rosies story Prt. One

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Description                                                        "A Rosies Story"
                                                             Part one
  I woke with a start, Everything Was so bright, so annoying to look at. All I could thinking about was if someting I was looking after had gotten away before what ever happened had done so.I tried to get up but sliped on the wet floor below."GRAAAAaaaaa" I boomed, angered by the fact that I could not get up, moveing seemed almost impossible. When I finally got up I rubbed my helmet(old habits die hard) I noticed that I had a A HUGE dent in it. Even I was surprised that I had lived through what ever happened to me,it was still a blurr, the whole day( or how ever long it had been) was one.While I was gaining my balance a Splicer noticed me and charged me. "Ha Ha I'll Bend you pipes you rusty peice of crap"!(This man must of been more deluded them most, chargeing a Big Daddy) I went for my rivet-gun and was shocked to find(Or not to find) the gun! The man came chargeing at me with a welding torch, ready to "bend my pipes", so I thinking fast punched him with one of my enormous fists. Lets say I bent his pipes, he didn't get back up. After this oddity I went to look for my missing rivet-gun. I changed my Portholes color from a dark yellow to a light green when I found it in a corner in the room off to my right."HHHUUURRrrraa"Curesing my self in my mind that I could not talk, well normaly any way. After cheaking to see if the gun was opperational,it was, I went on my way too see,......well I don't know. That was my problem, you see I was haveing a problem rembering what I was looking for or what to do. I remember that I ha e to look for something but what ,that is completetly over my umm helmet.As I was leaveing I noticced that that nut splicer was gone, I thought I killed him. Oh well, he's gone now so my search for.... what ever continues.As I walked out of the room I had woken up in I was suprised to see a battle going on at my feet! Two bouncers were takeing on a hord of god knows how many splicers,and fairing well. I was about to jump down to help when I thought about my head injury.Then I was even more supriesed to find I was thinking independently! Well, I was not one to...well I wasn't sure what to think, I COULD! Well back to the matter at hand, the battle was starting to die down and the remaining splicers were runing for the mediforical hills. I jumped down with a " BAaaAAWWoooo". The bouncers looked at me and responded. I noticed both were pprotecting little sisters and was(again supriseingly) relived to see them alright. As I was conversing with the two bouncers in our own language of "BAAAWAOooo's" I learned that They had been on rounds and crossed path's when the abushers attacked them. To say the splicers faired well would be a Very nice thing to say for only 5 of the original 26 survived."Come on Mr.B lets go find some angles" said one of the two little sister, I wasn't sure which, "Ya Mr.Bubbles lets go iI don't like it here anymore". They were walking out and I,not wanting to be left, started to follow the best I could.From the speakers I could hear the song"Praise the lord and pass the ammuntion", HURE, HURE" I muttered, A fitting song for the hellhole Rapture had become. As we were walking I noticed we were in the Atlantic Express section of Rapture, hu how had I ended up were. Better yet how had I gotten the dent in the head/Helmet that had given me more or less my free will back? Lost in my thoughts I had stoped and the two bouncers had left me behind, "BRRAWAAAAaa" I yelled to get there attention. They stoped and I half ran up to them. I noticed that the two bouncers were looking at me in a funny manner.(Yes there faces are hidden by the helmets but I could tell)"GRUWRaaaAAa?"? I questioned. They seemed to ignore me and walk on sisters behind, for safety. I stopped ad let them continue on without me. I went to the left in to the lower offices and train staion. As I was walking down to the train which I was getting an odd feeling about, I noticed that there was a clatter of feet moving around me.So naturaly(or as what was left of my programing dictated whatever it was) I went in to caution mode Got my rivet-gun in a ready poition and turned my porthole a sunny yellow. After a few moments of nothing I contiuned on, still ready for anything, with the notion that the train or something in it was off. As I continued I heard another clatter followed by the louedest shriek I had ever heard as a Big Daddy. I stoped very confused and looked around for what ever could make such a noise.  When I  was about to once again give up and move on, a creature that I had never seen before jumped out of seemingly nowere and laned three and I mean three feet right in front of me. To tell you the trueth, I was very badly frightened(still once again suprised by any emotions), and jumped as well a Big D could. At this it, seemed to do a kind of laugh, it was at that moment that I realized it was a she, or to be correct some type of female Big Daddy. This was even more shocking, From what little I could remember,my memories were still very hazy at that piont, I could not remember anything like this! Well to say I had some time to think would me nice, but she started to talk(Shreech but for now let's call it talking) "What is your designation, quickly!" She yelled.(A.N. for my sake i'm not going to write al of the GRWWAAA's and BURRRAWAAA's, it's just not fesiable for me too, pealse bare in mind from this poin on, that they are infact NOT taling normally, thankyou). Well you could tell I was in a bit of a panic and said " I don't have one" To this it seemed she to get a bit angery, She shreeched and told  yelled"All Protectors have a designation! Are you not a Protector?? I was, I told her, but I had some how forgoten after an nasty wack to the head/helmet. This seemed to calm her/it, what ever, down a bit. In a less shreecking voice she said," Oh you have been damaged?"  This was a little bit of a shock, I assumed I would have to fight, but no she seemed worried or atlease concerned."Humm..I see only the large dent, which might account for the......memory loss.... I have to say do Portector have memories? This was not good, I think were not to have anything but love for the sisters so oh boy I might be in trouble." Ummmm well, I.... you see, shit, ya I do". Blunt but sort of to the point. I hoped that get me somewere."......I shall forget that, for now, this might be of help to our cause, the family I mean" She said this with a bit of pride. " So" I grunted,"what now, were to I've got a funny ikling about the trainstaion up ahead, or should I get my head looked at"? She considered this for a moment."Do you feel any dioriantaion or discomforts besides th normal amount'? "No, not really....no". So with out saying anything se walked on and I continued with her. To my great suprise she had a backet on her back with a sister in it! "You have a sister?" I stopped."Hu, oh ya, I like you protect them". The little girl in the basket waved to me. "Hello Mr.Bubbles". I waved. " GURURRWAAAa" I bellowed, "He,he" she giggled."Come on, we have no time for sillyness, we must contiune to the trainstaion." I followed her on to the staion, she put the sister into a vent and several minutes later we arrived to the station, or to be correct the battle site. "Wow, what happened here?"I groaned."I think IT was here, a rouge daddy." "Oh, really, he made quite the mess with these splicers, so not much of a loss though." I really thought this, i think anyone would agree with me on this, well not the splicers anyway. " we need them, they are the famiy, they shall help us stop thoses who are agenst Lamb." "Who?" I was intrigued, who was this lamb, but before she could the train suddenly started,and before we could stop it, left us behind. "AHHHHHHHH DAMN IT! WHY NOW!" Wow can't we call another train?" I looked at her in shock."Well can't we?" "NO, that was the last of the use able trains in the area,*sigh*, we'll have to go outside to get there, the long way." I thought this over for a moment."Dangerous?" I waited for an answer, took the scilence as a "yes". "O.k..... you want to tell me how were getting out?" " That bulkhead over near the entrence of here, follow me." I did and she, I was intent she was a she, right an undamaged bulkhead in to the ocean. So we went out sie into the ocean and I was astounded by, well everything. so much growth, so much....well everything was glowing, it seemed that somehow the ADAM had mutated the plant life to extraordinary lengths. "So, ( said in a walesong, now so in the right place), were to?" "HU? OH We are heading to the now derilect amusment park, Ryan Amusments, to serch for the Interloper." I thought this over, once again glad I could, "So why is this Daddy got everyone's attention?" She looked over at me for a momet, seeing that I had no idea why, she answered. " Ah, he,it, is the one thing that stands in the way of the Lamb's transedednce". She sadi this wth a bit of venom,"It shall stop all the work the great Dr. has done, which must NOT BE STOPED!" I stoped in by large tracks, she seem so divoted to the Lamb, whoever that was, and wanted to stop this daddy, I jumped when I saw she was looking at me, the water seemed even thinker with tension, we were almost to the next bulkhead door, I continued on, with her in behind, this was officaly weird. As we walked out of the bulk-head entrence, I noticecd that the place, I'd never been my duty's never brought me here, was in diseray. The roof was leaking, the walls were in complete ruin, and some of the ride, we were in a matinence area, were through the floor. We walked along the non-crushed part of the floor till we got to a stair case and, you guessedit we walked up it, he-he. "So, whats this guy look like? A rosie like me, a bouncer?" I thought it might be just a rouge, happen before, from what I could remember(little to a-bit), a daddy once went insane after his sister was killed, sad to say he had to be down, killed three people before he was kiled him self. " IT is a very old modle, before my time, yours even, it is very dangerous, very, it is tottaly insane and will stop at nothing untill it gets to the lamb." "Really? Odd I've never seen a daddy go so insane over a little sister before, we should forget, were programed to, about a missing sister after 2-3 days".  "This one is different, it has it set in it's mind that The child of lamb is it's and it's alone." THe rosie staired at the big sister as they walked along the ruined railway. "Hu.... really, I guess we have to stop it." Wait, is it are of it's doings?" She stoped, and slowly looked at him. "What?" she suddenly looked to the left and screeched. "WHAT, WHAT IS IT?" I had readied my rivet-gun and switched my porthole to yellow. "SCRREEEAAAAaaaAAAAA"!!! She went for the boxes to the left of us. As she did a man in a dirty bule suit that, though fitlthy seem olddly newish.She leap at him and I noticed his face, it was normal! THis day was getting odder and odder. Then for no reason I leaped right between the two. I felt an odd likeing to the man. He wasn't like all the other crazy, spliced up people, to say clearly, he wasn't. I figured that why not let him live? I mean If he's sane, why he may be help! So as I said I jumped between the two just before she went for the kill. I also noticed that a little one was near him, hum? I thought whats this abo..! Thats all I got in as she came down on me, suprised she had done so. She leap off in a huff. "What is ths?",she screamed." what are you doing protecting him?" The blue suited man had run off into an under ground part of the park, so I focused on her. "SCRRRAAAAAAAAAAAA" she screamed, and came at me. She started to throw peices of the park it's self at me, the signs, the tracks, corpes, even the floor boards with some sort of mind power I'd never witnessed. After climbing out of the pile of crap She buried me in I noticed she was gone. I also noticed, to my supprise the man! He had aparently set a fire and made some sort of bed for him self. He looked up as I got slowly up from the pile. "Hu? Oh, uh...hi?" The man seemed to distance him self, his "camp" was about 10 feet away from me, but he seemed to not be completely scared of me, mostlikely because I saved his life. So I got up, looked around to see if this might be a trap, seeing nothing I turned to the man I risked my"life" to save. As I looked a him I was supried, to say the least, that he wasn't a splicer, or for that matter seemed not to have spliced at all! As I slowly walked near him he seemed a little uncomfortable, I stoped. "Soooo.... um, thanks for saveing my life,..... Do you understand me?" The man seemed to stare at me, I realized he was waiting for an answer, so I growled a noise that sort of sounded like "Yes". "Hu... o.k., um.. thanks and all, ya,..." He seemed really, I don't know not scared but awkward talking to me, I guess he'd seen others like my kind just walking around mindlessly, understandable. "So, you going to stay or leave?" I shruged, I didn't know, I guess I would stay, I risked my life to save him, so I would, I noded my head. "Oh"! He seemed suprised. "Alright, do you know a way out of here?" I didn't, but if I guessed,I was right, we would just follow the track untill it got to the end of this hellish ride, to I pointed ahead of us down the track. "That way? Alright". With that he laid down. "Oh by the way, names Mark, do you,(he made a waveing motion with is hands), have a name?" I didn't know, the process took my name, my life, it was a mirical I had free will, so I shook my head, sort of anyway. "Hu.... how bout Simon, do you like it?" I did, infact, So I shook my head "yes". "O.k. Simon it is" With that he slept, and I watched over the man named Mark.
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Comments: 9

ThSaverior [2010-04-03 16:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, not bad. But there's a ton of spelling mistakes.

So, do we find out Simon's real name as the story goes on, or is that all we'll call him?

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Jacob-plz In reply to ThSaverior [2010-04-03 16:45:16 +0000 UTC]

(Fucking spelling) That name is important, I can't tell you if it is or not, thanks for the comment, and I'm going to have to find some sort of online spell checker.

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ThSaverior In reply to Jacob-plz [2010-04-03 16:51:24 +0000 UTC]

Don't you have Microsoft Office Word 2003 or any other kind of computer writting program? Those allready has a spell check function in them.

Oh, okay. I'm interested in The Rosie's diary story.

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Jacob-plz In reply to ThSaverior [2010-04-03 17:04:10 +0000 UTC]

No I have wordpad, I've found an online spellchecker, so thats over with, and good, very good, expect another visit from Mark as well(read hs first if you have'nt already).

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ThSaverior In reply to Jacob-plz [2010-04-03 17:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, cool. Meltzer's Journey was pretty good too. But it had some spelling mistakes.

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Jacob-plz In reply to ThSaverior [2010-04-03 21:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Ya, Gonna fix that too.

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ThSaverior In reply to Jacob-plz [2010-04-03 21:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, not bad though.

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Jacob-plz In reply to ThSaverior [2010-04-03 22:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ThSaverior In reply to Jacob-plz [2010-04-03 22:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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