Dubious44444 [2010-03-25 22:40:07 +0000 UTC]
I never really cared for mark meltzer's story it bored me alot. but if anything you should detail every step he takes through rapture (not literally) also you should probably get a spell check i had a lil trouble reading some words. it'd also be interesting to include a companion of some sort.
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