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Jacob-plz — Meltzers Journey part one

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Description             "Meltzers Journey Part one"

"Well you came to see me, didn't you, you know, about the creature that lives in thw woods near the beach"? asked the man who was sitting ascrossed the table from me."Yes", I said,"Iwould like to know everything you know'! "I need all the information I can get, that DAMN creature took,"Ya no need not tell me what happened, it's been in the papper" I looked at him, he seem senceire. "O.k. tell me what you know."Alright, alright, here's what I know, well one day I was On the beach one day when all of a sudden I came accross some odd foot prints and sea life" the old man said. As I countinued on I noticed more of it, the foot prints I mean" I shoke my head in agnolagment"yes, go on" "Ya so I thought wierd, these foot-prints are huge, I mean not just big, like a diveing suit big" I jumped at this, this was something after all, this might infact be the thing that took " I mean the next thing I saw was this wired little doll thing" I looked at him wide-eyed, he continued." It was a little thing, Baseball head with a makeshift doll body same with the legs, this makeing any sence to ya"? I looked up at him, a little lost in my thoughts, "Oh Ya, it is". She left it, my little girl did."Go on". O.K. the doll also had a cork-screw hand like a drill, Thats when I saw It". I stared, he continued," It was damn fast, even in that suit it wears, It ha a large harpoon like thing attached to its hand" He looked at me to see if I belived any of this, seeing I did, He went on. "It ran around me, I guess to see if I was any danger or anything, seeing I was just a beach goer I ran into the sea and that was the last I saw of it." I was astonished, he had a such close incounter with it and lived, he was lucky. "So I was, SWEET JESUS. what was that?! " So I started off in a run back to my house to, you know I don't know what to do, I guess just to get away". "Any way after calming my self down and trying to tell myself I did just see something I went oout to the beach again" Man this man has brass balls, going out again. "This time I went with the pistol I had in the safe, to be safe, and after looking around and takeing these," He held out some pictures of prints and the doll," And went back in." I thought this over for a moment, this had to be it, the damn thing was still around, which ment I could still capture it. "Thank you, for your time sir" I said getting up." Hu? Oh no problem, and good luck, I belive ya, if that means anything." With that, I walked out of the dinner and in to the parking lot. As I got to the car a bit dissapointed, I had seen this before, the doll the prints, it ment that thing was still takeing little girls. I stoped at this, upset, missing my girl, Cindy. With a sigh, I got into the car and dorve off to the house. As I was Getting home, the place were all my Information on this thing and the kidnappings were I was overcome with a bit of greif. I was tomarrow, going out to find this place,"Rapture" I think, I am to sail on the S.S.  Nellie Bly. After cracking the last level of that puzzle and finding out that newyork held no more answers, that I had to go to sea to find this Lutwige. The captin is Casey Ferrence. I hope this trek will lead me to any clues about Luwige and the city. I shall record the rest of my trip on my tape recorder for sake of simplisity.

'In the caribbiean'
"I'm In the caribbiean and the crew is uneasy about the odd shipment of gold painted buddha statues that Ferrence has picked up, he's so concerned in the carrgo that he's stearing us into a troical storm to get away from the matilia. Any way I'm makeing progress with the box puzzle and have found out that Lutwidge had crated the I.O.O.P. to find thr city, and there are more members then I thought."

In marroco' December 6th
"I am here in Marroco today to meet Lee wilson seward a member of the I.O.O.P, as the Bly is in port here. I hope that steward has any information on Lutwidge. Wish me luck I hope this is not a dead end."

'Hours later'
"O.K so after meeting with Wilson I have learned some more information on the group and and got an introdution of the rest of the "Pawns" in the group as well" "Also he told that Lynch is more dangerous then he appears, I should expect his interference."

December 10th Cadiz, Spain
"I've been contacted by the women who had made the radio message in Marroco, the Yellow Pawn, I'm going to meet her and I'm hopeing she is going to give me some information."

'Hours later'
"O.K. , she gave me more information on the "Vanishing", nad when I asked for help from them she simply stated that my Agenda is not there own,*sigh*, and to make matters worse, half the crew is gone after the captin made them choose between leaveing the ship and staying" "When I finally cheacked what was in the statue I was shocked to find a gun! He's been smuggleing firearms, Jesus this is not good."

'January 10th'
"Jesus, after meeting with celeste on december 17th, to almost being killed by Lynch, wanted to apaently find rapture for the millions it was ppossiabley worth, then at least seeing that Celeste was alright by a message from her, it's been hell in france. I don't know why I did'nt record anything up to this point, guess I forgot to. Anyway, Ferrence recrewed the ship and we are on our way. To? London, were today I shall meet the glass pawn. to get any information to get to Rapture."

'A few hours later'
"O.k. I've been with the glass pawn and I never guessed that it would be Carlton Rede, the aouthor of the Frozen triangle. Anyway he gave me his new book ans sent me on my way to Reykjavik, Iceland, to meet the Ivory Pawn. I'm going to try to crack the box and see what i'm going to face in this city."


'Several days later'
"I've cracked the last layer of lutwidges' puzzle box, from what was inside, He as well talked about a dark tower and a bright light, possiably a lighthouse. Anway, the box also started some sort of beaken and  it seems as we close in on.... whatever, it flashes faster. I feel an odd feeling going around the boat, I think the crew is planning a mutinay jesus I need to get to that damn city before they do, all I can do is hope and follow this weird beackon


'2 Days later'

"We spoted it!  the tower was seen from an imperatrable mist but it was there! I plan at this moment to leave the Bly as we speack, the crew is going to mutinay any day now and I don't want to stick around for that.*SPLASH, CRRRREACK,"Alright boys ! lets do this, no survivers!" "HU? What was that? Oh JESUS!" "AHAHAHAHA, I'M GONNA CARVE YA' UP SUIT BOY, AHAAHHAHA!" "OH JESUS" *A CRASH FOLLOWED BY GUN FIRE, heavy breathing* "Oh god what was that.... thing.*a shuttering breath* I got to leave, now! I see a sub? Oh god, I'll take it what ever it is." *gunshots followeed by screams and more mad laughter*" Well........Cindy, Daddy's comeing girl"

(an audiable click is heard, folowed by a clank as the door of the sub like thing closeses)

"Daddy's comeing honey, daddy's comeing"
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Dubious44444 [2010-03-25 22:40:07 +0000 UTC]

I never really cared for mark meltzer's story it bored me alot. but if anything you should detail every step he takes through rapture (not literally) also you should probably get a spell check i had a lil trouble reading some words. it'd also be interesting to include a companion of some sort.

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Jacob-plz In reply to Dubious44444 [2010-03-25 22:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Ya spelling is not my(hehe) strong suit. I'll put a good bit of detail into the story that is up and comeing , and about the companion, the story shall show you there will be several "friends" of his, so no need to worry about that. This 2 parter and an other shall...oh I should not say anymore .

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