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JadedOptimist — memories
Published: 2006-01-27 04:37:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description I page through old photo albums,
digitally captured pixilated love that I’ll never feel again.
old songs that remind me of bygone days play over and over,
reminding me I’ll never feel quite the way I did that night.
the night the windowpane fell away
we realized the world outside wasn’t just imperfect,
it had invaded our happy household
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Comments: 6

phox [2006-01-27 12:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Sheer brilliance... You are a magnificent writer my dear. This is in one of your best pieces to date in my opinion, even though it's actually three. Together they just work beautifully.

The emotion you put into this piece is evident from the first line, wonderfully composed. I love your work...

Do not change a single word in this! It's perfect just the way it is...

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JadedOptimist In reply to phox [2006-01-28 16:04:57 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't change a word if I tried.

so, which one is your favorite?

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phox In reply to JadedOptimist [2006-02-09 09:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Definitely the second one... it just speaks to me so beautifully.. Well done babe!

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JadedOptimist In reply to phox [2006-02-11 02:14:37 +0000 UTC]

mine too.
thanks.

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justinaerni [2006-01-27 09:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully passionate. Great work very sorrowfull and hopelessly romantic.

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JadedOptimist In reply to justinaerni [2006-01-28 16:03:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you. which one was yr favorite?

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