HOME | DD
jadeedge — Improvement
Published: 2006-07-24 22:29:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1863; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 109
Redirect to original
Description
I redid one of my old sketches for SKotW.didn't come out 100% of what i wanted but...
comments??
Related content
Comments: 19
Very cute! Awesome coloring, although I think the main problem (as far as I can tell) is the chin. It's too wide on the left side and offblances the cute. XDDD That's just my opinion, though.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I really like it! You don't see many red-hair/ blue-eye drawings any more, which is kind of depressing. Props to the artist!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I really love the clothes you put her in, and the sheen in her hair, the only thing I really see that might need improvement is that her head seems to be too big even for a chibi, and it looks like she doesn't have a neck. Yeah, I understand the pose, and that it just looks like that, but, eh, just my opinion. Overall it's very cute. For some reason I just want to hug her. >>;
-Alexander
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
It's absolutely cute ! Nothing wrong to notice 
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
even for chibi it looks slightly disproportionate, but that just might be me
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
still cute though
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
extremely kawaii but the heads angle and positioning make it look as if her neck were removed and the head dropped down a little bit. Maybe she is shrugging her shoulders?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thanks for entering Amigo
so glad to have semi-pros like you in skotw
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I think this looks pretty nice. Like what the others said it is a bit unproportional, but chibi-ness does that to some things XD +fav
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I like her outfit and clothes, though she does seem a little unproportional o-0. ^^ But I think it's very cute, though
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
where's her neck? kinda looks like her head was pulled off of soemthing bigger and shoved onto a difernt body.
(sorry if I sound bitchy)
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
well... she's kinda "chibified", so usually means "bigger than normal head"...
also, when you lean on your hands like that, your shoulders are raised, so the neck isn't very prominent.
besides... it's just a copy of an old drawing i did like 5 years ago. i just wanted to see if my overall technique had improved. (hence the title >_<
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
How come the line for the breast is a bit off I think ok. I might sound like something bad but it is right.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I know, but the shoulders should be higher then, and the neck is there, just lower then the shoulders
👍: 0 ⏩: 0