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Published: 2006-08-22 14:42:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 8362; Favourites: 134; Downloads: 45
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it seems like it's "missing" something...
any help would be hot. i'm kinda burnt at the moment...
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hey this is really nice drawing
i like the folds of the cloth
good jobuu..
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please colour this! i love it!! but i think her expression should be like... more sexy hahaha..
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Her right hand fingers to poke our over her hip perhaps?
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Wow it's beautiful I love her face. Is that her red spirit scarf?
I'd like to maybe see more of her braid and maybe you could have her other arm wraped and held above her? or even just being pulled like her leg?
I look forward to seeing thsi colored!
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yup. sure is. guess thats why he/she is suspended from DA... goddamn art thief.
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she looks like nelly furtado.........SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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she looks like nelly furtado.........SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This might just be me- but are you gettin these directly from model pin ups!? I've seen most of your poses before- and the faces just.. I don't know- dont fit the body. I think more to it after I look at your other work. Just my own opinion though. Doesnt mean you don't have the talent.
Good work. Lets see something other then pin ups though.
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umm that right arm and the shape of her hips.....otherwise its rockin!!
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Besides her clothes you mean? XD
I think it' the fact the other arm is hidden. Maybe if you add it in somehow, nothing will seem 'missing'.
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Very sexy...try having her focus on the viewer as opposed to staring off into space...it might draw you in a little more. But awesome work.
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Do you color your work? If not I'll attempt it XD
*watches*
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you can if you'd like
i dont mind. just send me a link when you're done!
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maybe if you make her look like she's lying on the floor?
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curvage is missing for me, as well as loose hair--like even if you just relax the sideburns a bit...and instead of covering her crotch area like that, try an angled approach...kinda like a half diaper or something so it looks like underwear and not a micro mini skirt
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the material going to the right and out of the screen seems disturbing in a way. it's like she's gotten herself tangled but she's oblivious to it, having no expression on her face that indicates her awareness of being stuck.
and yes, that melancholic look on her face is missing.
but other than that, as usual, wow.
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maybe more detail to the body and maybe a sad expression?
Something totally off topic, if you rearrange the letters of her name you would get "Menu"
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(spraying nosebleed, until passes out on keyboard)
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Hm...maybe some lose hair would be nice, and the fabric scarf coming off to the right is pretty distracting. If that was just loose and dangly it be pretty cool, for scarf and hair :3
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gotta admit, I don't know much about the character... but how much would it change the tone of the picture if she was looking directly at the viewer? *shrugs* Something to consider.
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>_> i got a huge fettish for her after seeing this piccy now.
Good work XD
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Perhaps adding in her other hand would help; at the moment it feels like its hidden for some reason. Also you may consider curling the wrap back inwards to pull your view back into the frame. At the moment it feels a little distracting. Other than that the expression on the face is nice and your pose is dead on sexy. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll get what you want out of it.
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