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BobThePenguin2013 [2013-08-22 23:06:01 +0000 UTC]
They both look adorable 0w0!
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Ace-of-Phoenix [2013-08-22 22:56:11 +0000 UTC]
i like how you did the hair of both of them
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Tempest-Flame In reply to JadeTheLeafeon [2013-09-15 05:03:11 +0000 UTC]
Actually it was better the other way, and made more grammatical sense.
When you've got a grammar nazi for a best friend, you best watch yourself. I can strike anywhere, any time.
Like a grammar ninja...
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JadeTheLeafeon In reply to Tempest-Flame [2013-09-15 05:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Actually my boyfriend is a grammar Nazi, and we talk every day! He turned me into a grammar nazi...
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Tempest-Flame In reply to JadeTheLeafeon [2013-09-15 05:13:00 +0000 UTC]
You didn't use very good grammar there. 'The hair of both of them' is better than 'their hair' because 'their hair' suggests that they have the same combined hair, when it is replacing 'hair of both of them'.
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Tempest-Flame In reply to JadeTheLeafeon [2013-09-15 05:32:02 +0000 UTC]
Watch your language. And I'm in tenth grade and writing a book, I'm supposed to know this kind of thing.
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JadeTheLeafeon In reply to Tempest-Flame [2013-09-15 05:39:17 +0000 UTC]
Yes...but I'm in a less-er grade than you...It's strange because my boyfriend corrects my grammar and says sorry after...Not the same...
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Tempest-Flame In reply to JadeTheLeafeon [2013-09-15 05:45:48 +0000 UTC]
I don't apologise, because if I don't correct people they don't learn.
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Tempest-Flame In reply to JadeTheLeafeon [2013-09-15 15:29:37 +0000 UTC]
Usually, the best way to learn grammar and spelling is to go through eighth grade English with a teacher who hates bad grammar, and read about a hundred books per year on average.
And I'm not kidding about the hundred part. Read a book about every three and a half days. I do when I'm in school.
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Tempest-Flame In reply to JadeTheLeafeon [2013-09-15 21:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Give it a year. You'll be a truly proper grammar nazi by then.
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iMacAttacki [2013-08-22 22:49:40 +0000 UTC]
They are so adorable *u*
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Tigerstar12356 [2013-08-22 22:42:19 +0000 UTC]
Annnnnnnd, Can I claim one? :3
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Tigerstar12356 [2013-08-22 22:41:45 +0000 UTC]
PICK ME OHH OHH OHH PICK ME! PLEASE!! PICK ME! I KNOW!
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JadeTheLeafeon In reply to Tigerstar12356 [2013-08-22 22:44:45 +0000 UTC]
...They are Jake and Butter's children
MWAHAHAHAAHAHAHDGHJGJ what am I doing with my life.
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