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Published: 2012-06-12 05:24:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 237; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 2
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Description darkness, welcome.

cross the threshold,
a groom carrying his bride,
marry me to fuck-you-very-much sentiment.

hold your hands over my ears,
ignore the way i ask you to leave.

i'm only serious when i'm conscious,
and i've been dreaming since i met you.
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Comments: 13

Postmorteum [2012-07-21 08:06:15 +0000 UTC]

So frighteningly scary; like playing with fire or mischievously playing by the edge of a cliff. Almost careless and almost empty - but still present. Your other side being smothered by this one, just for the mean time, until you allow it to regain strength when you figured the prior wasn't the best of ideas.

Pungently potent.

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Jadite In reply to Postmorteum [2012-07-21 14:05:14 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you enjoyed it. <3 thank you.

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Postmorteum In reply to Jadite [2012-07-21 14:19:13 +0000 UTC]

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BegginerMay [2012-07-06 05:14:02 +0000 UTC]

i love the ending. asdasd

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Jadite In reply to BegginerMay [2012-07-07 04:56:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3

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DestinyChick [2012-06-17 19:40:36 +0000 UTC]

"Meh" ?
The last stanza is my favorite.
What was it inspired by or was this a workshop assignment?

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Jadite In reply to DestinyChick [2012-06-17 20:18:49 +0000 UTC]

idunno. it just happened. not a workshop assignment. of course not. we don't get assignments.
asidefromthefuckinghonestpieceicannotwrite.

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DestinyChick In reply to Jadite [2012-07-02 17:49:25 +0000 UTC]

why can't you write it?
is it fun?
who sponsors it?

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Jadite In reply to DestinyChick [2012-07-03 15:21:51 +0000 UTC]

it's hard.

erm, sponsors? o.o

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DestinyChick In reply to Jadite [2012-07-16 21:55:46 +0000 UTC]

like who hosts the program? xD

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Jadite In reply to DestinyChick [2012-07-17 13:08:24 +0000 UTC]

program...? slam's not a program?

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Rinnyi [2012-06-12 21:33:53 +0000 UTC]

'i'm only serious when i'm conscious,
and i've been dreaming since i met you.' one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. <3

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Jadite In reply to Rinnyi [2012-06-12 21:42:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3

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