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Paperwick [2012-06-19 19:46:10 +0000 UTC]

I love what you did to the tree bark. You've got a lot of really interesting details. From the pencils to the inks, you lost a little bit of the depth between your characters and the tree house; I think you went a little heavy with the detail and blacks behind them. The white spot inside the tree house entrance is weirding me out a little since I can't really tell what it is, I didn't notice it in the penciled version. It'd be cool if it was some sort of silhouette of the stuff inside maybe?

There are some other quirky things that I'm just noticing now too: the number of fingers on the characters and zombies are inconsistent (some have 4 and some have 5), and I don't think that the arrow that is going through that one zombie's head could actually reach him from that angle. Looks more like the gunslinger-girl would be the one blowing his brains out. But it is a great visual. That and your pompadour zombie are my favorites.

But all and all, this looks fantastic. The playful way you drew the brain-splatter really suits the style. It gets the message across without being too 'gory'. All the little smart details are fun to pick out. I could definitely learn a lot from your inking.

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gishyfresh [2012-06-16 11:41:40 +0000 UTC]

This cover looks sick, bro. Great job man.

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LarsonJamesART [2012-06-14 13:04:08 +0000 UTC]

looking good man

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