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JamieCOTC — Black and White

Published: 2010-08-03 19:18:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 570; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 17
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Description Something else to put up, practicing to get back to the comic.
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flatlinedreams [2010-08-03 20:04:46 +0000 UTC]

I like the common theme of the swirl shape. You get that across well.

I also like the way you've shown the outlines of her collarbone. It establishes congruity with the eye, in that it knows that those lines are there on the other side, too, only covered by her hair.

Looking closely, I noticed that her left eye is a tiny bit higher than her right eye. Most people don't have perfect facial symmetry, though. Was that intentional? Or is her head tilted ever so slightly?

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JamieCOTC In reply to flatlinedreams [2010-08-03 22:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I appreciate it. As for the eye, probably just not paying attention.

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