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Published: 2017-05-20 15:43:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 6065; Favourites: 244; Downloads: 64
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Colored my sketch. I think it came out pretty nicely, and particulary since I really disliked my previous attempt on Ann.Wanted to draw Joker aswell in this image but I'll leave Joker for a different time. Guess I'll do Haru next
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Wow, I've always wanted to get batter at leather. You seem to have nailed it though... Dayum!
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interesting pose. like it.
it would be awesome if you can add a background
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Thanks Servo! I kinda wanna create more coloured artwork from now on, my gallery is being overtaken by sketches haha
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Well its always nice to challange onself and take one more step ahead..
your skill with sketching and drawing expressions is top notch, now comes the coloring , its done perfectly, I cant point a thing wrong, however the colors seems to have taken life out of ur character but I think if you keep on practicing its gonna get better... The colors are done perfect though ... Good job in the end
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>however the colors seems to have taken life out of ur character but I think if you keep on practicing its gonna get better
Ohh, can you elaborate more on this? I don't really understand how to interpret it. Is it the color combinations that make it unreal? Do the colors distract from the movement? I'd gladly take any criticism or feedback because I gladly take anything that can help me to improve
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When, I said life has been taken out, I just said what I noticed without giving much thought but now I had a good look at her her trying to figure out why she seems to have less life than your normal work.
I have found a few reasons and I'll number them here and as I looked closely I found
1- There is actually nothing wrong with this drawing and the reason why I felt less life is because of your recent works, your recent works had few very lil colors, like only eyes were colored and hairs, that thing gave so much intensity to character , like for example take an anime when A character is shown to have enhanced abilities, their eye colors changes and lil enhancement here and their suddenly changes the character intensity and he/she look this much lively than before. So , there is nothing wrong with "Panther" she is really a hottie and yes she is full of life its just that your recent work has those lil enhancements that gave them so much life and this
2-The second thing is that the character is not in close up and so her expressions are not very , I noticed this when I zoomed her and I just saw that her expressions were very intense and she looked just perfect.
As you can see, its actually not the drawing but the comment that I made was not smart and lacked character and for that I apologize , I'm sorry. But rest assured whether I give my opinion just by looking or deep analysis I am always honest. I think an honest opinion is the best thing you can give to someone and a dishonest opinion only for flattery is like a poison, its better you shud keep silent than to give a dishonest opinion. I do chose words carefully and structure my answer so it does not look rather mean but what I say is always my honest opinion and I love your work and I always want to have a positive contribution in your growth.
Having said all this, the room for improvement is always there so yeah even though in my opinion this work is 10/10 but still there must be places where u can improve. Like shading and lightening etc I'm sorry I cant be very elaborative here because I really suck at arts but All the very best and yep rest assured you will always have my most honest opinion on your work even if it may not be very smart
Good Luck
Take Care
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Alrighty, thanks for the awesome Servo. It shed some light on my confusion and my understanding has been increased haha. I'll focus on the things you mentioned and try improve more while I can
Yeah often while praise is great to receive, it can be a double edged sword and lead ya to overconfidence. haha but Im glad I can count on ya for honest opinions, thanks Servo. I appreciate it ^^
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