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Janji009 — Jet Girl
Published: 2013-04-27 04:38:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 817; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 9
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Very polished, hard to say the lines need any work, but its the pose, everything below the chest, fantastic and fun to look at, everything above it, awesome detail and not a bad angle.
BOTH together, eeeeeeh the anatomy breaks down when you drew in the breasts cause the chest can contort like that cause the really straight on pose to not match the angled back of the waist up.
Here is how you could fix it, re draw the waist/ribcage area to no angle as sharply, and move the the hips down somewhat to the left so to balance the changes above. it really is possible to make this work out well, but its just a SUGGESTION. i still like its just an eye sore for me there.
anyways, keep drawing her, shes hot!
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thanks so much for the input! Now that i look at it you're definitely right, I was trying to focus on womanly curves in this piece, but when it meets a rigid robot frame I see that it conflicts with it. Ill take what you said to mind when i re-edit this piece.
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