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Published: 2009-05-01 13:31:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 12830; Favourites: 121; Downloads: 618
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Electronique v1________________
Electronique is a project for school I'm working on.
This was just a first draft of the design, far from perfect ( too much candy-looking ) but I wanted to share it nevertheless.
I know it's not orignal.. but I like how it looks
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I'm critiquing since you said it's far from finished yet. It's fresh, colorful and uses nice graphics, but it feels to me like one of the so many. Still it's pixelperfect for it's kind. I love the double pixellines and embossed fonts. I don't mind the candylook too much, you're aiming for a party people (and I'm sure they love pink, purple and blue lights).
What bugs me a bit is that the logo seems unfinished. It looks like a rough presentation, for what it could look like later. It's rather poor compared to the quality of the headsets.
You didn't score high on originality and impact, but it's a great start. I'd love to see your progress from here on. I'm sure everybody could learn from following your progress.
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Agreed, the logo needs some work
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First of all I love your work in general, and every new design keeps amazing me, and so does this design. I really, really love the background you used for the site. I also like the logo and the header, it fits in nicely e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
I do have to say that I don't really like the navigation menu, I find it a little bit too big. I also would like to know how to rest of the design and the footer would look like, right now the design looks a bit "empty" in terms of content.
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this site aso provide some great electronique stuffΒ Β belpre.ma/Β Β
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I love the colours you used! Even if they do look like candy ^_^
If your planning on revising, maybe use some green to ofset the pink and blue
I was wndering how you do those running white lines... wont you enlighten me?
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clean, like it
btw: the guy on the 2nd photograph looks like lawyer from fear and loathing in vegas^^
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maybe is not VERRY original but looks great, and if you create this in flash, with moving background for exemple, the final result should be fantastic,,, for me, i only change one thing, "you have two arrows in the blue zone, so i supose you can change the content of this zone?!, try make this zone a litlle transparent, so we can saw the bacground, but be carreful with the typography(color and type),is just one idea. keep nice work,
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damn, I thought this was a journal skin
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Looks great for what it is; you should make it available as a Journal CSS skin!!
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Can't wait to see the finished project!!
This, ImagineAir, etc... all amazing! What class is this? I might want to take it...
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I really like the shiny effect in the header. Fresh colors I like it!
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The logo looks like the Word Art stuff 
Waiting the final version ..
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Real nice
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I'm missing more content and a footer, I think you can do better detailing than this mate. Logo ain't doing it for me either...
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Candy or not, it looks good. Can't wait to see the finished version.
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Nice one Jan,
the main problem would be the lack of a branding-colour,
other then that nice mock up
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Nice, looks great. I like the colours. Reminds me of the apple site.
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I think the noise or whatever on the background is a bit too strong but other than that it's a nice and clean design.
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