Comments: 16
Ace-demigod [2010-05-08 02:19:53 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing i love this story.
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Fierce-Dities-Link [2008-10-08 03:20:15 +0000 UTC]
Awsome. I can't wait to read more. I must find out what happends.
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Dustomega [2008-08-22 17:30:30 +0000 UTC]
awesome, can'n wait to read the next Chaptor
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LinkxMidna4eva [2008-07-15 04:02:28 +0000 UTC]
oh!! i luv it!!! please continue!! <3
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emptyfuture25 [2008-07-06 04:58:30 +0000 UTC]
OMG!I`m totally hooked!!!!!Great vocab!!!I will look forward to the next part(s)!!!!!!!
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jared2492 In reply to emptyfuture25 [2008-07-06 16:25:50 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading.
and the next part wil be added soon!
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jemnin [2008-07-05 23:43:08 +0000 UTC]
not bad not bad at all keep it up
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jared2492 In reply to jemnin [2008-07-06 00:16:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I was a little nervous making this story. I'm an amatuer writer and after seeing the works from other people I thought mine would pale in comparison, but so far 2 people have favorited this so it already exceeted my expectations.
anyway, glad you liked it and keep a look out for the next parts!
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jemnin In reply to jared2492 [2008-07-06 00:23:07 +0000 UTC]
dont worry i will, good writting comes with practice and this has potential the ideas there, the st ups there all you have to do is continue
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