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Java-Kat In reply to Size-And-Stupidity [2012-03-04 17:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much :3

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Java-Kat In reply to marshcaramellow [2012-03-02 06:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Sure critique is always appreciated :3

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marshcaramellow In reply to Java-Kat [2012-03-02 20:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Here I go!

Her face is rather squished up; the facial features seem a bit too stout to me. The fingers' joints seem rather off; they seem to have only two joints instead of three, excluding some of the foremost fingers.
Her shoulders seem rather wide for her stance (I'm assuming that, since the symbol is turned a bit, she's standing with her right arm towards the viewer).
Her left upper arm seems rathger short, unless you were foreshortening it and I didn't notice.

But other than those few problems, it's great! :3

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Java-Kat In reply to marshcaramellow [2012-03-04 17:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique I really appreciate it.
I see what you mean with the face. Her nose is to close to her lips and to big for her face. Yes I think I shaded the joints wrong.
I resized the image may that caused the shoulder problem since they loo normal on the original sketch...
Yes it was supposed to be foreshortened but I again I shaded it wrong.

All I can do is thank you for the time you took to point those things out to me :3 It is always good to get critique because sometimes you just don't see your own mistakes.
I don't think I have time to fix that picture right now but I will definitely work on everything you said when I come around to it.
Thank you again <3

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