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hippiebuddhist [2006-04-17 01:32:40 +0000 UTC]
I liked it. It was a little long at some points which is to be expected. The metephors worked for it and I like how it managed to stay whole and complete over the whole length. This isn't the longest poem I've ever read, ever heard of the Illiad or the Odyssey?
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hippiebuddhist In reply to Jay72 [2006-04-17 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]
But the Devine Comedy isn't really an epic poem, unless you read in in Italian.
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Jay72 In reply to hippiebuddhist [2006-04-17 14:10:13 +0000 UTC]
How is it that the greek ones are epic in English? What's the difference? *some deep thought going on right now*
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hippiebuddhist In reply to Jay72 [2006-04-17 19:33:02 +0000 UTC]
Greek retains some of it's idomatic experssions in English, Italian doesn't. There is a whole slew of language diffrences that took a year long university level course to get it straight for me. But I do love the Devine Comedy more then Homer.
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Lizuka [2006-04-17 00:53:15 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly well done. This looks long, but once you get going it seems as though the lines just fly by.
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AmbrMerlinus [2006-04-17 00:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Crazy length, but once I started I couldn't stop. Nisooti is an awesome name. The elephant-woman is such a sad character, to whom I could relate and so she is my favorite. It has a beautiful message as well, and as I'm sure many have said before, you are a very descriptive writer. I liked how Nisooti was rewarded for his kindness and wisdom at the end in a very simple and satisfying way; good ending.
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SolarPhoto [2006-04-13 01:57:25 +0000 UTC]
From what I read it looked good! but dude... 280 lines... is crasy long!
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Jay72 In reply to SolarPhoto [2006-04-13 19:18:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Yeah, i know it's long, but that's just the way epics are it seems! :-p
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im-fine-again In reply to Jay72 [2006-04-13 08:47:53 +0000 UTC]
Well keep up at it, you have a talent for it
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