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JayneCroyez — Fionna the Human!
Published: 2014-01-14 03:39:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1211; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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I was testing out how I can draw humans and this happened oopsI traced the background don't hurt me
accepting critiques because yolo
original size: prntscr.com/2pwuuu (ignore this)
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It's OK, not bad. I think the lines are a bit too bold, too. Fionna doesn't have that line on her neck either ( Or adam's apple ). The "Stain" as others like to call it, was an attempt to create this crease within her chest, which in my mind doesn't look great.
Back the the bold lines; It was okay for lines to be bold in some places, but especially not at her hair or the hills, now it looks even more unrealistic.
I would of given you props for the mountains, but those were traced and the tree colors don't stay in the lines ( You learn this in 1st grade ).
What I thought Hats was saying "THE BACKPACK LOOKS LIKE ITS ONLY ON ONE STRAP", was meaning that the backpack doesn't look like it connects with the strap on her right should; It doesn't look like it to me either, by the way.
In the "Adventure Time" show, the grass is more subtle than the grass you have. Grass flakes here and there to make it look like it is not completely smooth.
It seems to me that you really focused on the sword, there. Nice coloring with that one.
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lol, I'm not giving 5 stars just to be nice, lol, I'm giving 5 stars because I love this artwork, and I think that it looks close to Fionna drawn as she was in the show. I actually think that this looks better than she was drawn originally ^_^. I like the sword to, because it looks like the one that the Ice Queen gave her, and the hairstyle looks good too. Overall, this artwork is beautiful! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I LIKE THIS
EXCEPT FOR HER APPLE JUICE STAIN
AND THE BACKPACK LOOKS LIKE ITS ONLY ON ONE STRAP
100 word minumum:
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what a great critique
I applaud your words and appreciate them
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im the critique master ushudno
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Alrighty, I'm not the best at critiques.
First off, the outlines are a bit thick. It somewhat distracts from the overall drawing, but still, not a major problem.
Second, I'm not sure what mark that's on her neck, but I see it as an Adam's apple; I don't think most girls have an Adam's apple.
Third, the shading was well done. The shading on the chest looked a bit like a stain (not sure if i's suppose to look like that), besides that, the shading was very good. The shine on the sword was very nice, too.
Fourth, some of the marks on the brass seemed a bit messy and rushed. Also, I don't understand why you outlined the hills black, when you outlined the body in color.
Fifth, the background scenery was very nice. Some of the tree leaves looked a bit lazy, besides that, keep up the good work.
Lastly, the handwriting was pretty OK. At first, I thought the "F" in Fiona was a "B". This is your normal handwriting, so I cannot judge upon it too much. Although the smilie face was cute, it took away from the seriousness of the drawing.
Overall this was a very cute piece; keep up the good work!
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you're pretty good at keeping seriousness despite being my friend xD
it's not an adam's apple, it's the part between shoulder blades
the hills are black simply because I combined the layer outline with the colors before I did Fionna's lineart colors, and I couldn't undo that
it's not my normal handwriting, it's a cursive F. I like to do that to look fancy
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I don't watch adventure time but this is really good! I especially love the eye. I also love the pink sword. Why do these messages have to be 100 words ? Um I'll just say random things now I like this drawing I like it so much I really like it even tho I don't watch the show ugh OMG why do gees have to be so long sorr if I'm wasting your time you can stop reading here here here here here here here here here here here here here here here finally I am don't with this critique thing!
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You're welcome ^^ Thank you so much for watching me *O* I'm honoured >///<
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