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Jayson-kretzer — Rogue redesign

Published: 2009-04-29 06:01:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1484; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 113
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Description This is my redesign of Rogue for 's contest.

I didn't really follow any previous make of Rogue's Costume, but instead i tried to give her a fresh look with a bouncy haircut and a short cape that attaches to the bands around the top of her gloves. Rogue has always has to wear a bunch of clothing so she doesn't accidentally touch someone, but a girl has to show a bit of skin every now and again, so I gave her a tube top. Fun times! Hope you likez.

Pencilled and inked by hand and colored in photoshop.
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Comments: 17

Last-Superpower [2009-08-20 17:56:55 +0000 UTC]

sweet redsign on the character. Your photoshop coloring skills are awesome.

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to Last-Superpower [2009-08-21 05:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks... you are too nice! heh

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NGoff [2009-06-01 01:54:07 +0000 UTC]

(Sorry this is so late...)

Congrats on placing 3rd!

Nice pose, movement and expression throughout!

I like the added circle in the BG to give more to the composition, however, it seems a bit dull. The colors have some depth to them with the different values, but the flatness of the circle does nothing. Perhaps it's more because on top of that you have a nuetral color as well...the grey. Circles can be hard to handle when colored flat because we natural assume a sphere. But with a square outline...we just think of it as a frame of sorts...especially when used as a BG element in design.

You have a lot of circular motion with the "cloak" () thus you won't loose anything if you replace the circle with a hard edged design. Or make it into the X symbol to have more variance in colors...and if it were saturated as well, you won't have to worry about it over powering the figure.

I like the color scheme of green and yellow with the white trim and collar as well as the highlights in the green. But you didn't continue the highlights with the waste or arms....? Is it a different texture? If so, that's hard to notice with the similar colors.

I like the shadows you started working in the skirt, however I would have liked to have seen it more throughout...such as on her arms and torso a bit more. And don't forget the white going over the chest...at least on the right of her breast like you did the flesh...continue her shapely bust throughout.

Cute facial expression with the eyes and lips. I like the black lipstick. And great motion of the hair...nicely detailed.

Careful with the joints of her left hand. If that first bend is to be her first knuckle (of 3) then careful with how far you extend the lines into the top of the hand...otherwise it appears like they're bending at the second knuckle thus seeming to be very short between the 1st and 2nd knuckle.

I like how stylish the design is. And even though I'm not one for high-heels (or clogs) or tight skirts for kick @$$ chicks, you made this work. She's wearing black leggings (which I like how they cover the top of the boots) that will eliminate the 'flashing' if we were to see up the skirt. And the heels are thick which compliment the awesome tread of the base...making them a bit more practical to get the job done.

Great work! Thx for participating! XD

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to NGoff [2009-06-01 17:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch for this critique. I agree with everything!
Thank you again for hosting the contest and keep up the awesome work you do! Till next time... be good.

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NGoff In reply to Jayson-kretzer [2009-06-01 21:10:49 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! So next time I can be bad? I just need to be good till then...

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to NGoff [2009-06-01 21:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!

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LordMiste [2009-05-06 08:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to LordMiste [2009-05-06 11:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Thx!

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wynnter89 [2009-05-05 02:29:07 +0000 UTC]

yor entry rocks !

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to wynnter89 [2009-05-05 03:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch!

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wynnter89 In reply to Jayson-kretzer [2009-05-06 05:47:40 +0000 UTC]

most welcome !

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wynnter89 In reply to wynnter89 [2009-05-05 02:29:15 +0000 UTC]

your*

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JasonGodwin [2009-04-30 03:00:48 +0000 UTC]

I love it... cool new look ... the boots and the choker are sweet.

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to JasonGodwin [2009-04-30 03:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Danke' -- You are too nice! Wanna fight about it?

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AMILLARD [2009-04-29 16:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Looks good man,Im not a big fan of capes but the overall look is great.

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Jayson-kretzer In reply to AMILLARD [2009-04-29 17:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks... The definition for cape says "a sleeveless garment of various lengths, fastened around the neck..." and since this one isn't fastened around the neck, maybe we can call it a cloak or something instead and then you can become a fan! Btwz... Looks like Saturday we'll sketching starting around 10am.

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AMILLARD In reply to Jayson-kretzer [2009-04-29 22:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Lol i can roll with the cloak idea , As for Saterday,sounds good still not really sure what im gonna throw down. Heros just dont seem to be my thing . If you wanna get up Friday afternoon for some sketching let me know i get off about 3

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