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Jazmine-Chan — Clap Until Your Hands Hurt

Published: 2011-12-27 18:18:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1166; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Description I like this piece in and of its self, but I am also going to watercolor that cirlce red and add random blots of red and black. And maybe color the halo and other places.

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iNinjaguy [2011-12-28 20:38:18 +0000 UTC]

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Your use of values, texture, and form on their clothing is absolute top notch, and I love the contrast between the buttons and their skin tones. Perfect for a black and white piece in graphite such as this.

Pete's hair is textured articulately as well, and I can see some eraser was used to emphasis the highlights and direction of the hair.

The hand is wonderful, the fingers and thumb all form around the neck very naturally looking, and the shading near the wrist and joints are superb.

I like the subtle shading on the hat, strap, and faces, again, really kicking the contract while keeping it semi-realistic. (I suppose that's your style. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>)

I only have a few concerns to unfinished details (But it's probably just my taste in realism, and doesn't necessarily take away from anything you've already done.) such as both the bat wings and angel wings not being fully shaded. I think there could have been richer tones near the corners of the feathers and triangular shapes in his wings.

Also, when drawing particular objects, try looking more into the details. You did the clothes wonderfully, with each fold and tension in the fabric, however, the head of the guitar is a bit warped out of perspective, but you kept the angle right on the neck, and at least you have the six tuning knobs for a standard guitar, versus some odd number not reflecting the actual object. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>

Other than that, great piece! I think your watercolor additions will make for a more interesting piece. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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BelatedGift [2011-12-29 12:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Just... great. xD

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Jazmine-Chan In reply to BelatedGift [2011-12-29 14:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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BelatedGift In reply to Jazmine-Chan [2011-12-30 11:19:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Laylaisawesome [2011-12-29 04:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful

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Jazmine-Chan In reply to Laylaisawesome [2011-12-29 05:36:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Laylaisawesome In reply to Jazmine-Chan [2011-12-29 05:49:58 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Addicted-Squared [2011-12-28 10:27:26 +0000 UTC]

FALL OUT BOY<33333333333

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Jazmine-Chan In reply to Addicted-Squared [2011-12-28 16:53:22 +0000 UTC]

YESS!!!! <333333

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Addicted-Squared In reply to Jazmine-Chan [2011-12-29 05:46:28 +0000 UTC]

<333333333333333333333333333

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TheTinyHobo [2011-12-28 04:24:33 +0000 UTC]

I love Fall Out Boy! I recognized them right away. You did such a good job on this. I can't wait to see the color, it sounds like you have a really good plan for it!

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Jazmine-Chan In reply to TheTinyHobo [2011-12-28 16:53:50 +0000 UTC]

You do? That's awesome! Thank you so much!

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Flippypeace [2011-12-27 21:37:47 +0000 UTC]

omg i love this....

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Jazmine-Chan In reply to Flippypeace [2011-12-27 22:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NobodyThePerfect [2011-12-27 18:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous!

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Jazmine-Chan In reply to NobodyThePerfect [2011-12-27 18:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NobodyThePerfect In reply to Jazmine-Chan [2011-12-28 20:33:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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