Comments: 17
iNinjaguy [2011-12-28 20:38:18 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Your use of values, texture, and form on their clothing is absolute top notch, and I love the contrast between the buttons and their skin tones. Perfect for a black and white piece in graphite such as this.
Pete's hair is textured articulately as well, and I can see some eraser was used to emphasis the highlights and direction of the hair.
The hand is wonderful, the fingers and thumb all form around the neck very naturally looking, and the shading near the wrist and joints are superb.
I like the subtle shading on the hat, strap, and faces, again, really kicking the contract while keeping it semi-realistic. (I suppose that's your style. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>)
I only have a few concerns to unfinished details (But it's probably just my taste in realism, and doesn't necessarily take away from anything you've already done.) such as both the bat wings and angel wings not being fully shaded. I think there could have been richer tones near the corners of the feathers and triangular shapes in his wings.
Also, when drawing particular objects, try looking more into the details. You did the clothes wonderfully, with each fold and tension in the fabric, however, the head of the guitar is a bit warped out of perspective, but you kept the angle right on the neck, and at least you have the six tuning knobs for a standard guitar, versus some odd number not reflecting the actual object. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>
Other than that, great piece! I think your watercolor additions will make for a more interesting piece. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
BelatedGift [2011-12-29 12:05:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Just... great. xD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Addicted-Squared [2011-12-28 10:27:26 +0000 UTC]
FALL OUT BOY<33333333333
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
TheTinyHobo [2011-12-28 04:24:33 +0000 UTC]
I love Fall Out Boy! I recognized them right away. You did such a good job on this. I can't wait to see the color, it sounds like you have a really good plan for it!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1