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IshikawaNaoki [2019-09-04 06:20:31 +0000 UTC]
Those rotten Banderlog!
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jazz316 In reply to IshikawaNaoki [2019-09-04 08:01:30 +0000 UTC]
Indeed! Glad you love them.
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IshikawaNaoki In reply to jazz316 [2019-09-04 15:37:16 +0000 UTC]
By the way, are there any other Jungle Book characters that appear in your fanfic besides the wolves and the Banderlog?
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jazz316 In reply to IshikawaNaoki [2019-09-04 15:43:23 +0000 UTC]
Some will but not in this current story. I'm planning on making multiple stories which some others of my own version will appear
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IshikawaNaoki In reply to jazz316 [2019-09-07 18:07:30 +0000 UTC]
Does he that mean Shere Kahn and Kaa aren’t going to be in this story?
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jazz316 In reply to IshikawaNaoki [2019-09-07 18:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Not in this one. But in the next sequels, yes.
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Lawliette-chan [2019-09-01 22:27:43 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful !!!!
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lordmep [2019-08-28 15:37:40 +0000 UTC]
Dammit! My mind just went... places.
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jazz316 In reply to lordmep [2019-08-28 15:41:43 +0000 UTC]
What are your thoughts on this? Would love to hear them.
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lordmep In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-28 18:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Without having read the backstory, clearly they're on their way to meet the king. The douchey looking apes are clearly pleased with themselves for catching a rare prize. I'd say this is a good setup for Mowgli to act more like his original self (not the Disney version) and be proactive in a daring escape. Also, because I'm me, this also looks like it could be a set up for some etchi.
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Fail-Seeker [2019-08-25 18:29:08 +0000 UTC]
I will help them! *Pulls out sword*
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jazz316 In reply to Fail-Seeker [2019-08-25 18:29:37 +0000 UTC]
Lol Glad you love it.
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harleyfreedomrider19 In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-26 16:12:08 +0000 UTC]
man I think Injustice 1 joker's super move was way better I love that Wakey Wakey part and I love his victory thing where he pours gasoline on the guy lights a match and says YOUR FIRED and then he lights him up
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harleyfreedomrider19 In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-27 03:20:26 +0000 UTC]
but still those 2 wolf brothers will haven even More hell to pay I wonder will Exon suspect that those 2 were behind Mowgli's Kidnapping
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jazz316 In reply to harleyfreedomrider19 [2019-08-27 14:53:01 +0000 UTC]
Possibly...but not quite yet but there is a hint that does prove it. You just have to figure it out. It was part of the deal that was made
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harleyfreedomrider19 In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-27 14:59:49 +0000 UTC]
if he is gonna expose them when he finds out I say do it spy style and report it to his parents without them knowing it until they come face to face with their parents
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harleyfreedomrider19 In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-27 16:10:07 +0000 UTC]
aww I hate waiting I say bust those wolf brother dicks right now
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jazz316 In reply to harleyfreedomrider19 [2019-08-27 16:32:26 +0000 UTC]
Lol I know. Everyone days but thats what leaves the story thrilling.
As I said in the deal there was an exchange that will be a key factor in discovering their treachery
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SORARULES23 [2019-08-25 18:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Well crap just got serious.
"Yeah but jokes on them. I kidnapped their monkey general. He's in my closet ready to be sold to the Twilight Town Zoo. I even named him!- Wha hey!" Maverick was cut off by the sound of the bound monkey trying to escape.
"Mhmm! MHMM!" The monkey general howled in his gag mouth for help.
"Eh.... Excuse moi mes amis. Be right back." Maverick whispered to us before leaving to subdue the monkey.
"HMMPH!" The monkey general was tackled.
"Hey Thade?! Calm down! Don't make me use- hey Thade! Stop struggling!" Maverick said as he held down the Monkey as he kept screaming in his gag. "Thade? hey shhh, Thade? Look at the flowers Thade."
"hmmph?!" The Monkey general yelled.
Then.... **PAINFUL SOUNDS**.
"HAAHMMPH!" Thade screamed in pain before collapsing dead on the ground.
"Huh? Well there goes five grant bounty." Maverick shrugged in disappointment, then he came up with a new idea as he walked away. "Hey maybe the Arendelle Museum will pay. I sure could use a raise in my allowance."
Your sick Maverick. You know that?
"Oh stop. Your making me flush." Maverick sniffed at the complement
That wasn't a comple- Ugh! Never mind!
You made this story interesting so far Jazz316. Can't wait to see them rescued.
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JakeShiba1226 [2019-08-25 18:01:22 +0000 UTC]
These two must be protected at all cost
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JakeShiba1226 In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-25 18:10:51 +0000 UTC]
Could Neo, my Disney oc, offer some help for these two?
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JakeShiba1226 In reply to jazz316 [2019-08-25 18:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks :3
I'll post it in my second account Seiryu2028
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