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Jazzman1989 — An Irrational Argument
Published: 2008-09-16 14:15:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 8
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Description Please never say
that I do not make your day.

Please never act
as though I never gave back.

Please never look away
because you know I mean what I say.

Please never ignore
that you are who I live for.

Please never forget
that I love you beyond wit.
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Comments: 18

mode-de-vie [2008-09-16 17:12:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the ideas portrayed in this. It's how I feel about certain relationships when things can seem like they're going sour.

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Jazzman1989 In reply to mode-de-vie [2008-09-16 17:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I just was trying to think of things that really hurt in a relationship and then the ending, which fits my title.

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Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 15:18:06 +0000 UTC]

very sweet and lovely poem

it's gorgeous

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Jazzman1989 In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 16:50:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you I love the title the most

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to Jazzman1989 [2008-09-16 17:01:13 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome dear

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Jazzman1989 In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 17:07:15 +0000 UTC]

don't you just love the title?

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to Jazzman1989 [2008-09-16 17:20:42 +0000 UTC]

lol absolutely

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Jazzman1989 In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 17:23:04 +0000 UTC]

it makes me laugh each time

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to Jazzman1989 [2008-09-16 17:29:05 +0000 UTC]

lol yea

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Jazzman1989 In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 17:30:26 +0000 UTC]

kind of like you when I think of how silly you are

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to Jazzman1989 [2008-09-16 17:35:43 +0000 UTC]

lol
not as silly as you!
.................................................................................................... puddin

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Jazzman1989 In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 17:36:32 +0000 UTC]

puddin

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to Jazzman1989 [2008-09-16 17:42:10 +0000 UTC]



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Jazzman1989 In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-09-16 17:45:12 +0000 UTC]

so funny

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XiaoQiu-CoinDeVille [2008-09-16 14:32:16 +0000 UTC]

Did you think of someone special before sleep took hold of you?

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Jazzman1989 In reply to XiaoQiu-CoinDeVille [2008-09-16 14:33:25 +0000 UTC]

yep lol I kind of always have someone in mind when I write, it really helps to bring out that romantic side.

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XiaoQiu-CoinDeVille In reply to Jazzman1989 [2008-09-16 14:37:48 +0000 UTC]

May someone will always be the one to write to and make your poem beautiful.

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Jazzman1989 In reply to XiaoQiu-CoinDeVille [2008-09-16 14:42:16 +0000 UTC]

The thing is, it doesn't have to be someone I'm dating or whatnot, it just has to be someone I like or remember in someone.

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