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Published: 2011-02-25 13:46:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1249; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 20
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Spider-Man being the true hero he is.-Jin
Spider-Man (c) Marvel
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Alright, so, I think you did a really good job with the cracking in the concrete and in the plaster-coated brick that Spiderman is holding back. It's also a good color choice for his costume as it's not over-saturated. The kid is a great touch because he adds feeling to the piece. On top of that, his expression makes him look innocent, which is good because kids only focus on what they're doing at the moment. So I feel you have a solid piece
Some things that could be worked on (this is me nitpicking):
-Though Spidey can stick to objects and vice versa, that slab is at angle that would make him rock to his right.
-If anyone else were holding it, it'd be slipping off them rather than balancing against their back.
-Since his right arm is in the air, his pec would be more of a smooth swoop than an edge, even crunching forward.
-Where his feet were pushed into the concrete, it'd be broken like the cracks you have everywhere else instead of flat spots as though his feet were smooshed into those shapes and then reformed.
-The kid has light on him even though he's standing in the shadow of the huge plaster-brick wall. Same goes for Spidey. There would be darker shadows under both characters since they're closer to and making contact with the ground vs the wall object because light would be coming in from their surroundings.
-Next time you go to color, start with a 50% gray background instead of white. White tends to wash out your colors. Also, I'd recommend you set your brushes to 60% opacity and 60% flow and messing with that so colors show through the other colors and make it feel as though they're all in the same environment. That ratio doesn't always have to stay the same. Once you get more familiar with laying down color, you'll know whether you want it to be 20%, 40%, etc.
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lol. Kids are so oblivious.
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This is quite badass!
Looks like an official cover^^
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Thanks I am quite proud of this one.
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